|Reviews for Watch Your Back|
| Guest chapter 48 . 1/11
This is one of the best fanfiction I've read, a really good and well tell story. Love it!
| Articallie chapter 48 . 9/25/2016
Wow, all I can say is wow...
I had tried reading this story several times and I never managed to make it past the first two chapters, (this might sound odd, but the story just wasn't one that I was wanting to read at the time) but yesterday (or rather the day before yesterday as it is now nearly 3am), I decided that this was the story I wanted to read. And oh boy did I read it!
I honestly don't think I have ever read a story so enthralling! I was hanging on every word! The characters! The setting! Everything was so real in my mind. You truly transported me into their world.
It was amazing. I absolutely LOVED it!
| xxrayxxX29 chapter 48 . 6/1/2016
i love it to bits such a strong story line i love it ! PLEASE WRITE MORE AMAZING STORIES LIKE THIS
| CrassKal chapter 4 . 5/31/2016
Hmm, not sure if I want to continue this. The show's personalities are annoying, and shows that you brought nothing to add to the characters. Perhaps that will change with progression of the story. Also, the constant RANDOM CAPITAL WORDS are distracting and obnoxious.
| Natalie chapter 48 . 2/15/2016
This is by far the best fanfic that I have ever read! You should write professionally!
I was also extremely glad to read a Pokemon story centered around Gary Oak. He is one of my favorites!
| Lady Deviance chapter 48 . 10/1/2015
This is beautiful. How did it take me 12 years to discover it?
| Lady Deviance chapter 44 . 10/1/2015
Faaaack this is so good. Like... I took one break reading it.
| crossingbxrders chapter 1 . 8/12/2015
This is still one of my all-time favorite fanfictions from you.
I reviewed ages ago (via a different account - I can't remember which one, seeing as I've made many ;-;), but Good lord, I forgot how much I adored it. Every little detail of it. This and your one-shot Happy Accident was what got me to ship EgoShipping. I love EgoShipping about as much as I love PalletShipping, and PalletShipping is my OTP for Pokemon!
One of my favorite things about you, too, is how in love you are with Gary's character. I am an avid Gary fan-girl myself, ha-ha!
Anyway... forgive me for not getting to the actual story. I remember everything that's happened so vividly. You are honestly such a skilled writer and I hope to see you active again one day so you can light my EgoShipping heart on fire. You are a true blessing, Maia.
| Magyka13 chapter 48 . 8/8/2015
I love this story so much. So beautifully written. I shall save it to re read over whenever. 3
| Chris chapter 30 . 2/17/2015
You actually wrote steaks instead of stakes. -_- Steak is a food, and a stake is used in tents and is sometimes the risk of something.
| iloveumbreon123 chapter 48 . 9/8/2014
Hi. I think this is probably one of the best story's I've ever read, and from me, that's saying something, due to the fact that I read almost constantly, fan fiction and normal books alike. Thank you for writing this. Goodbye!
| Unformal Sorrelle chapter 48 . 7/26/2014
I really enjoyed this. You have a good grasp on characterization. this was quite an interesting read.
| coelicasi chapter 48 . 4/6/2014
First things first; I very, very rarely leave reviews. And I NEVER review a story that has been completed, especially for this long.
Now that's over with, OH MY GOD. I only clicked on this story because I was BORED, and I am a huge fan of Lamora's The Game of Champions, so I was curious of the other gems that may or may not be hiding under all of the muck I was expecting.
This was... Well, there are no words. I read this all in a single sitting, it was engrossing in a way I never expected. I haven't watched the anime since it originally came out all those years ago, but the nostalgia you put me through was like a punch in the gut AND THE CHARACTERS UGH your portrayal of Gary was exquisite and I love him to pieces now and the romance under all of the angst and terror was beautifully written.
Please tell me you have an original story published, because you are obviously talented and if you are still writing regularly I get shudders to think of what plot bunnies you have running about your head.
Actually, I read the entire thing in 5 hours. Usually I get distracted halfway through and let it sit for a bit, but not this time. And I immediately scoured your profile for other fics and read Happy Accident, which was as cute as can be, by the way.
I would love to see you write more of this pairing. And now that you're older, perhaps an even more realistic interpretation of the Pokemon world as well, where some wild Pokemon actually pose a serious threat to trainers?
| KimaSora chapter 48 . 3/16/2014
wow just wow! this story was amazing!
| Guest chapter 31 . 1/14/2014