Reviews for Unknown Potential
UDMonk chapter 2 . 12/5/2010
M'kay. Why is there no speechmarks? Y'know? "These things?" It's painful to read without them showing you when dialouge starts and when it ends. I'll try and struggle through it, but don't be surprised if I don't review the latest chapter when I reach it.
CrazyKidDeath chapter 11 . 9/17/2008
great story, cool ending
SchizophrenicDemon chapter 11 . 6/19/2007
Despite reading fics off this site for a couple of years I just now got around to making an account so this is my first review. To put it simply, this is the greatest piece of fanfiction i've ever read. The ending symbolizes the greatest prize of all: true freedom. The freedom to do what you want, whenever you want, and without there being any real consequences that you might regret. Haruko has the power of Atomsk and obviously since medical mechanica has been crushed no one could touch her and naota so they're essentially above the law now. Combined with your excellent descriptions of the hopelessness naota feels from being stuck on board a ship for two years, I think it was an exemplary story. Too bad you didn't try to continue it with a sequel,that would have been cool.
ItWasYouThatSentencedMeToDeath chapter 10 . 7/6/2005
your fic kicks ass and finaly naota x haruko has been written yay
ItWasYouThatSentencedMeToDeath chapter 7 . 7/5/2005
i guess stealth doesnt work for haruko
ItWasYouThatSentencedMeToDeath chapter 6 . 7/4/2005
that Rickenbacker is awesome it does every thing it flys it shoots stuff it can be used as a chain saw base ball bat and of course a bass it kicks ass

your fic is as awesome as that bass
ItWasYouThatSentencedMeToDeath chapter 5 . 7/4/2005
if he hadnt died by then id figure he didnt need no space syrum like if you jump out a plane and live you didnt need a aprechute but your fic is super awesome oh happy 4th of july and what not
ItWasYouThatSentencedMeToDeath chapter 4 . 7/4/2005
that would seiriously suck ass to be almost

rescued and then left be hind
ItWasYouThatSentencedMeToDeath chapter 3 . 7/3/2005
ive always wondered how doese haruko travel through space i mean her vespa flys but theres no air in space so what part of her anatomy alows her hot alien self to survive out there i love your fic
ItWasYouThatSentencedMeToDeath chapter 2 . 7/3/2005
i love this fic and i love you for writing it ashiteru Seiri
ItWasYouThatSentencedMeToDeath chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
wheres haruko i hope shes in the next chapter i worship . im crazy _
Grasshopper chapter 6 . 5/24/2005
Sakurazuka Subaru? Did Seishirou-san finally take Subaru-kun as his bride? *imagines Hokuto-chan (in spirit form) as their enthusiastic wedding planner* Kukuku...

Love the fic so far - most FLCL fics are too spastic to keep my attention, but this is wonderful.
Kraken's Ghost chapter 11 . 2/13/2005
Pretty cool story. I LOVE FLCL and Haruka/Naota interacting. Atomsk and Naota's powers are a cool plot twist. And it's just funny that two of the strongest beings in the galaxy are running around on a Vespa _. What ever happened to the two Gibsons (Naota and Atomsk's?) Thanks for letting us know Canti survuved (I personally like the weird robot.) I hope you write a sequel! Good luck with it!
Dorrin chapter 11 . 4/20/2004
Excellent sci-fi story! Nicely written and well executed. I loved the final chapter.
Hope to see a sequel someday!
vashatsocom chapter 11 . 1/15/2004
i may not no much but u have quite a grasp of flcl and the greatest writer ive seen in fanfiction or books id like to see a sequel and see where haruko naoto and canti find themselves id read it you also are great with imagery awwell just thnx for the fic its like a free gift keep umm trucking... man that was lame awwel bye
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