|Reviews for Torment Not The Child|
| Cartlin chapter 4 . 4/29
The only one I feel sorry for is Dior, who was obviously neglected by a selfish father who put his own needs over his child's, and Legolas is a bit a of a spoiled brat. Not your best work at all. Very rushed, and not really believable.
| Cartlin chapter 1 . 4/29
Love the series, though I have to ignore the whole "healer" thing, since the great healer of Middle Earth was Elrond, or Estel who studied under him. If Legolas was such a great healer, why would he have done f*ck all during the quest?! Like allowing Boromir to die, or heal any of the numerous injuries that occurred during the quest? The idea just doesn't work.
| thranduilisfab chapter 4 . 12/14/2014
Omg I love it. Absolutely brilliant! I cried...
| Lady Secor chapter 3 . 11/2/2014
Just for reference, I happen to be an English major and a Tolkien scholar and the absolutely ridiculous flames that The Reviewer sent you are preposterous! I hope that whoever this cowardly dog is that they actually leave a signed review at some point so that people who actually KNOW what they're talking about can correct their ignorance just as rudely as he commented on your slip ups. As far as the maturity age of elves, it has been argued about by various scholars who have all come to different conclusions, but Tolkien himself never really specified it. If The Reviewer has any references (within Tolkien's writing not some ninny's interpretation thereof) then I should very much like to have him or her send them to me to back up the credibility of these completely inaccurate and unjustified remarks. If ever The Reviewer DOES write a story instead of a flame, I would very much like to read it and "review" it in similar fashion to the review given to you. Ignore ignorant idiots and continue doing what makes you and many others happy. Always follow your muse. Your writing, though there is room for improvement (and isn't there always for ALL of us) is really quite good. By the way, I will be happy to sign MY review since I am not a sniveling coward.
| Halwen the Great Elven Warrior chapter 4 . 3/29/2014
awwww... so cute! i wonder how and when leggy will become that way more 'prim and proper' prince we all knew him to be before we started reading of his childlife.
| Halwen the Great Elven Warrior chapter 3 . 3/29/2014
DON'T KILL HIM!EVERYONE LOVES THAT LITTLE LEGGY!
| For Ithilien chapter 4 . 12/15/2013
Wow... Good aim and shot, Legolas! Sorry Beregund...
| BrightGreenNails chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
Three words: Best. Ending. EVER!
| BrightGreenNails chapter 3 . 8/29/2013
NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN!? WHAT"S GOING TO HAAAAAAAAAAPEN!?
| Allie Danger chapter 4 . 7/31/2013
| hypertonic chapter 4 . 2/4/2013
| BlackGalore3 chapter 4 . 12/16/2012
I loved this story! Brotherly love is so adorable. While your grammar and spelling is quite good and your overall story line is well developed the thoughts and sentences themselves are not extremely complex, but that comes with practice so keep writing.
| Nim3Hunters9LGA chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
awww poor Legolas :(
Im glad he's okay.
Nice story :3
| don't.diss.the.puff chapter 4 . 8/7/2012
NOOO OUT OF TISSUES I will EAT Dior for being evil. You write REALLY well because not many things make me cry. Great emotion!
| don't.diss.the.puff chapter 3 . 8/7/2012
NOOOO DON'T DROWN nice cliffy btw!