Reviews for Moon and Star
Roxy chapter 13 . 11/22/2012
can u please please please update the full version of chpt 13 on to the actual story i cant get to the link and its a M rated fic its supposed to have slash
Newt Marauder chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I'm intrigued by this story, and I want to continue it. Your grammatical errors are really annoying me, so I hope it gets better.
ljusalfheim chapter 13 . 9/29/2011
Your fic is M-rated, so why didn't you publish the lemon here? I couldn't open your site D: and I'm sad for that :(
RemmyBlack chapter 23 . 5/22/2009
This is really good, D
AlchemicNinja26844 chapter 13 . 5/5/2009
I couldn't get to the site!

I wanna know what happend and why Remus is naked!

the voice of singing clouds chapter 23 . 8/20/2008
aw what a nice story
NoDayBut2Day525600 chapter 8 . 9/19/2006
more detailed kissing descriptions please!
The Miss Marauders chapter 8 . 6/14/2006
Um, yay! Romantic...not...

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The Miss Marauders chapter 7 . 6/14/2006
Stupid stag!

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The Miss Marauders chapter 6 . 6/14/2006

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The Miss Marauders chapter 5 . 6/14/2006
Euch. Grr.

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The Miss Marauders chapter 4 . 6/14/2006
I have a sneaking suspicion of where this is going. It involves Snape, Sirius's realisation of Snape liking Remus, and the Whomping Willow...

I do so hope that isn't true.

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The Miss Marauders chapter 3 . 6/14/2006
Ugh! Sirius you idiot! You don't say that whilst looking at the person you're crushing on! People will notice, stupid!

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The Miss Marauders chapter 2 . 6/12/2006
*blinkblink* Snape has a crush on Remus? I hope you won't use that at all...

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The Miss Marauders chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
It's a good idea and plotline but everyone speaking on the same line and all the punctuation errors bug me.

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