this storie begins alittle bit strangely but it's becoming better and better until an extraordinary ending! Thanks for sharing your creativity with us!

That was amazingly beautiful.
thank you for writing such a wonderful piece. :)
I will enjoy reading it again.
and again...

You really showed the whole extent of Knives psychological scars. And I love the sacrifice idea. Oh God, Knives needs love.

I seriously hope they are not all absorbed.
this is killing me, my stress level sure is high. Had I had to wait for the next chapter, I would have literally exploded.

I don' t know what to say anymore. This chapter is on another level with the universe. And here I thought the story couldn't get any better. My brain is in extasy.

This chapter has to be my favorite of all time.
Actually, the story is now number one of my list.

Her mouth was saying something, but her mind was thinking sometjing else.

I am really admiring Meryl's determination right now. And I love being able to completely emphatize with Knives.

I am in love with this story.

I like the dream Knives is having. For some reason, it seems so deep and fitting.

Why was it killing him? In fact, what was killing him?
Poor Knives. Still, in his misery, he is lucky to have found that one spider.

I hope Meryl is not walking to her death.
but she does make a good example for awesome human feelings. :)

You!
Oh you torture me so! After reading the ending of this chapter, I forgot what the beginning was like. My mind was blown away. Oh God.

I love the frightening actions of Knives. You kept him so wonderfully in character. He is mesmerising. And Meryl is impressive too with her stubbornness. Perfect.

Your story is PURE GENIUS! And to my delight, the chapters are long!

You rock!

I was far from expecting that.
I have to say, the build up to this point is simply perfect. I feel the shock and worry along with Vash and the others. I love this rollercoaster of emotions! Well done!

Nicholas... the voice of wisedom. That is scrary xD

OMG, I can't believe that Meryl had been broadcasting... ahem... everywhere. She would jump into a hole and never come out of it if she knew xD

Milly impressed me beyond words! Oh God, that was fabulous!
And poor Meryl, being asked to redo her little "knives awakening" trick again xD that was so fun!

OMG! Now I can't help but imagine what would have happened have she chosen to actually open that space suit...
She would have probably chosen the path of harakiri once the others would have barged in on that xD

priceless and hot !

Amazing start!
They are all so IC too, I could picture them saying and doing everything the way it was told!
And the descriptions are perfect.

I have to say that I am overjoyed at Nickolas being alive, and the way you portrayed it was awesome!

I know it has been years since you wrote this story but I think it deserves a review. This was well written and beautiful. I was drawn into your story by the depth of your characters. I found myself falling for Knives and his misguided emotional reactions to his trauma. I think you made him believable. The ending had me in tears and I had to take short breaks in my reading. Knives sacrifice and Meryl's unavoidable passing was heart wrenching. The concept of the edge of the blue where you're reunited with your loved ones was a touching and beautiful concept. It is a shame you no longer write fanfiction as you're quite talented and I would have loved to read more your works. I have read your two other stories but this one captured my heart. Thank you for sharing your creativity.

this fic made me a knives/meryl fan.