Vampire? well shit and cool at the same time.

He was all ready immortal before but if he going to turn into a wolf god help the vampires because silver ant going to do shit on him.

I just wanted to say that this is an a amazing fanfiction. Dark but really really good. Even though I doubt you'll be updating it soon, I just wanted to say you've definatly gained a new reader. I find it sad that motoko is dead but it really drove home how real the conficlt was. ANyways I just wanted to say that it was a really delicious read.

This is such a sad but well done story. I really look forward to reading another chapter!

Damn this story is good. I love the plot and character interactions. Two thumbs up! I hope that you update soon, I'm loving this! Peace Out!

EXCELLENT! This has been written very well. I hope to glimpse more of this soon.

If you had killed Shinobu, I would've found a way to hit you.

LOL I loved this chapter! SO TENSE! and I love how involved all the characters are hehe

nice chapter, short thou, does this mean shinobu going to be turned into a vampire then? well if that happens then she will be still alive, and then she can tell everyone what she knows and they can get their asses beat down for what happen to motoko

So, truth be told, I didn't remember much of what was going on to begin with. Not at all. I got a hazy recollection of it all as I was reading but I am fully convinced that I should go back and read the whole thing, if not skim it. It'll be fun, I promise :D

And I have to say, loving the comeback. It's still a bit awkward with me on the Keitaro and Kanako front but strong females like Suu, Haruka, Tsuruko, and a few others just rock my boat hehe

And yes. Vampires are the best :P

LOL see you later! School is kicking my arse already. But I will try to be online tomorrow night...or Tuesday. But tomorrow may be tough. Don't know haha

YEAH UPDATE! Keep up the good work, kudos

Great story so far.

amazing!i jsut got finished reading this grand fanfic...hope to see a post soon!

Man I really want to see Keitaro kill that stupid bitch Kanako! Or at least say something like, "After this war I don't ever want to see a f'n vampire again!" Or just have him find out what her true intentions are towards him and the 'lesson' she was trying to teach him about mortals and immortals.

...Motoko... YOU...

Wow, i found this story yesterday, and i must say this is amazing. I havent seen Underworld yet, or at least not the whole thing, i have seen bits and pieces, enough to get the general idea of what you're talking about. This story has ups and downs, and it takes you on a rollercoaster and goes back again. When i first started reading and saw that it was 47 chapters, and the first parts seemed like they were leading up to a long drawn out sappy Naru/Kei fic, i almost stopped, but then i kept reading, and it showed that it was not a long drawn out sappy anything fic, it is actually an amazing work of liturature that keeps the reader at the edge of their seat, or in my case, bed. I keep wondering how and when this will end, but then i realize that i dont want it to end, it is like one of those books you cant put down. What happened to Motoko's letter, is it gonna be waiting when Haruka gets home? Will Haruka make it home? Is Keitaro in love with Kanako? These and more questions keep running around in my head, and i cant wait for the next chapter! Good Luck _