This was a very good story may I inquire when this is set though is it before or after the end of Muyo?

Yay, another long awaited update, and a good one at that. Can't wait for the next chapter.

WOW! I love your story! Please update the next chapter soon! I'll be waiting to read it!

I first read this in the Tenchi Muyo Fanfiction Archive not too long ago. I was kinda bummed out because I wanted to send you a review via email but I couldn't find your email address. Then I thought, maybe your story is in ? So I looked there and lo and behold, there it was, all ready for my review! :P
Anyways, every chapter was great and wonderfully written. For once, Ayeka was actually in the plot and acted in character. After reading chapter 5, I remembered a fanfic called "Paradise Lost" in which what happened to Ayeka in this story also happened in that one. It is a very good fanfic and can be found in The Ayeka Fan Club.
This is one of the very few fanfics that actually gets my heart pumping and me anticipating every line.
Right now I'm in suspense of what is going to become of Ayeka. Will she let go of her hate as Tsunami and Washu advised? or will the hate and rage still burn in her soul? Well, I won't find out until you update.
Remember, a rushes job is a mushed job. Don't let others rush you or discourage you. Don't let the number of reviews discourage you either. Just think that some people out there are enjoying your great writing.
I bid you farewell and hope for the next chapter.
-Akemi Akibi a.k.a. A Loyal & Faithful Reviewer

Hey! Love, love, love, love your story! Please continue!

This story is getting good and more interesting as I read it. Please continue writing it.

YehP this story troublez meeh*.. _Laniqu3_ i hope tenchi saves ayeka...(hint*)

I really really like your story so far. It's good. Keep writing.

This is getting so good. Better yet, Tokimi is actually doing something EVIL! I've seen a lot of not-quite-that-bad stuff, like kidnapping etc., but this plot is set up beautifully and a reader can actually hate the bad guys!

well...i think this a really good story...umm..but somehow it leaves me with a badd feeling...pleez continue it!_Laniqu3_

Nice. You got a lot of work done in such a small amount of time. I envy your dedication to the art of fanficiton. This has been a nice break between classes, and I wish you good luck on the inevitable confrontations which seem to be approaching.

Wow. There was a lot of time and efforrt put into this. Your writing style is consistent with the spirit of the original series, and the characters are very well developed. I was kind of nervous about the little information session with Washu, because authors sometimes try to tell readers what's going on by having a single character go off on a speach to the other characters when it's really nothing more than guesses. Having Washu give a 'class' on the issue could easily have taken place in the TM world and I applaud you for that. It's sad that there's only two other reviews, but whenever I attach TM to a fic it seems practically no one reads it. Don't feel discouraged, this is going along beautifully.

I really like this story! You have so much input from all the characters, it's hard not to see each one's point of view (_)b And you update quickly! Keep it up!

Hey, this is pretty good. It's nice to see Ayeka at the forefront of a fic for a change.

On the technical side of things, you have better spelling than most, and your grammar and sentence structure seem fine, or at least nothing jumped out at me as glaringly wrong. Easy on those quotation marks, though, as they have a tendency to pop up in the wrong spot" on more than on occasion.

Keep it up, and update soon.