Reviews for Grim Dawn
Tempest's Rain chapter 10 . 9/8
Woah, that was great. I really loved that story and I loved how Ron, Moody, Remus, Sirius and Harry were presented. I loved the plot and the characters thoughts on one another.
Nocturnal's shroud chapter 7 . 8/1
I'm sorry but u clearly don't understand how a secret keeper works. As snape says nobody lasts for long. Well that's true u can't torture a secret keeper to gain the knowledge of what said secret is. They have to WANT to give u the secret. U can't torture someone to make them tell u the secret cos that means they don't WANT to give it up. The secrets contained in the soul and that's how it knows whether or not the secret keeper is willing to give the secret. And also it's never stated which house moody was in as he thought his enemies ( if they knew his house ) would be able to draw/use a weakness of said house. And personally I think he'd be a hufflepuff above all else. As he's shown the main traits of that house. The loyality he has to Dumbledore. His hard working nature at hunting down and capturing death eaters. And he was amazing at finding loads of dark witches and wizards. The traits I just talked about are loyality, hard working, and amazing at finding things ( and yes that's actually one of the traits of the puffs house ). But he definetly wouldn't be in the snake house. He got the determination sure but not the ambition or cunning of that house. So yeah but we don't know for sure. But anyway. My final thoughts on this story even though I've not read the rest of it. Is that it sticks to one plot point for too long. Ohhh harry misses Sirius. Ohhh no matter what snape tells the "hunters" they don't believe Sirius is innocent. They just say nah he's just insane from being in prison to long and he doesn't know what side he's on. Even after they say he's in a cell. They think it's cause he's crazy? What? That's fucking stupid. Honestly Dumbledore isn't a retard he could tell by the things Snape is saying that Sirius is clearly not working with Voldemort. Nah but this story could've been so good but u drones on the same plot point when it should've been ended ages ago. They should feel Sirius is innocent/ not guilty anymore or at least think he's slightly innocent. No sorry irritating story that had good potential.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/18
Very nice story
cmfisher chapter 1 . 7/13
A wonderful story. Thank you for your time.
quoth-the-ravenclaw chapter 10 . 6/21
Loved this story! The quality of the writing is amazing, as usual. The plot was super interesting and unique too. Your characters are superb - you've really nailed them. Thanks for writing.
EevyLynn chapter 10 . 6/11
After reading the Unbroken Universe, I got so sad when the time came for them to confront Peter. ;_; My heart broke for them.
Ackamarackus chapter 5 . 5/7
man, i'm dying. when are they going to help exonerate sirius and capture peter?
Kagugu chapter 10 . 5/3
thank you for your hard work
Mysteryfan17 chapter 10 . 3/28
In my head, I see the twins with the map nearby at that last bit and hear the two of them use 'Moony and Padfoot' and just... starstuck, their idols in front of them. I so wish this was continued because I love the set up and story and just... I love Sirius saving Harry and BEING THERE and LIVING and I just... this fic made me very happy, and kept me up late last night, had to sleep and work before finishing but, yes, this is a fav. 10/10
Guest chapter 10 . 2/2
Nicely done.
acetwolf94 chapter 10 . 1/2
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE MORE!
Ivy Tearen chapter 1 . 12/29/2017
I love this story, it was such a great way to get Sirius free
Lunaloverxxx chapter 10 . 11/30/2017
This is my favourite story! Its incredible!
Verwijderd chapter 10 . 7/19/2017
Thoroughly enjoyed this one! I went to check your personal page in hope of a sequal, but couldn't find any - or I missed it. Anyhow, great job! :-)
777MAR777 chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
God, Harry seems like such an idiot in this...
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