|Reviews for Grim Dawn|
| Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten chapter 10 . 3/23/2009
? COMPLETE? ALREADY? *bawls* This was good...
| Anmccarty chapter 10 . 3/18/2009
good story you should really wirte a sequil
| MoonWiccan6 chapter 10 . 3/9/2009
Fabulous story. I loved it!
| cassandra chapter 10 . 2/13/2009
I loved your story. Up to now I found only few which I really liked, but yours is one of them. Will there be a sequel? I'd like to know how the story develops now with Remus, Sirius and Harry.
| zebrasdancing chapter 10 . 2/10/2009
i really liked it. is there a sequel?
| AliceCullen0629 chapter 10 . 2/8/2009
this is really a good story, keep up the good work
| Anthiena chapter 10 . 2/4/2009
It's touching and so much better than cannon. I love it.
| Sonia120462 chapter 10 . 1/24/2009
rele sweet! remus is one of my fav characters...update soon!
| Sakura Reservoir Chronicles chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
| Osprey Eamon chapter 10 . 1/15/2009
Fantastic story. I think you've done a great job of showing the relationships between the characters.
| Rori Potter chapter 10 . 1/10/2009
Great. Update soon.
| Multitaskmom chapter 10 . 1/6/2009
That was nicely done. The characters felt real and their thoughts, feelings and observations were written beautifully. Thank you for writing!
| Global Conquest-er chapter 10 . 1/6/2009
| Standing Wolf chapter 10 . 12/9/2008
That was a nice story for inbetween ;)
(Between all your Oneshots and the waiting for the last chapter of PD.)
I'm kinda sad that I'm almost through your Harry Potter fictions, even though they held me away from studying and doing quite neccessary stuff. They became like a drug for me- my hands start twitching if I'm away for too long from sentences like "...and the bitterness was fading behind sadness that was deeper than anything Remus had ever seen before" or " ...'Crucio' and there he was screaming again and not caring about it" or any of those sentences.
The UU / your different advances towards the Harry-Potter-Problem is something I feel at home in. I know your style of writing by now, I can feel with your characters, I can understand them (which is more than JKR was able to do) and the best thing is that I don't ALWAYS know, what they're gonna do, but I ALWAYS understand why. And I'd say with that you've fulfilled the duty as an author with perfection.
Anyways, coming to the point: Grim Dawn.
What a nice, short story. And I've gladly taken to notice, that you have not centered on the fight against Voldi, but on Harry's location.
And what else I liked very much is that marvelous fight between Lupin and Black. It's not something your readers get to read often...- admitting, that in your other stories there's not quite enough reason for those two to hate each other.
Anyways, I just love that how Lupin hates Sirius for betrying James, how Sirius hates Remus for not even giving him a chance and how Sirius becomes so da** angry and bitter. Uh, I loved that part!
“Don’t I?” his onetime friend retorted. “Feeling betrayed, alone? Feeling lied to and abandoned and tossed aside just because of what others think you are? Oh, stay up on your moral high horse and tell me that I don’t understand. Then you can tell me what a hero you think little Peter was for standing up to me and I’ll laugh in your face.”
Gorgeous that was! And that was even better than Remus hitting Sirius right in his face- a helpless man, mind that- hating him, really HATING him. Awesomeness!
Well ya, as you noticed I'm quite intrigued by your stories and maybe that is the reason why I should finally get myself away from them, before I lose myself in them.
Keep yur head up
| kaychan14 chapter 10 . 11/20/2008
This was a great story I really enjoyed it! Is there a sequel?