Reviews for Grim Dawn
mekareami chapter 10 . 7/29/2011
Sad that is it over but I enjoyed what you wrote. Thank you for writing and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Ferretess xxx chapter 10 . 7/25/2011
Aw... :') If only this was canon! Amazing story, wonderful job! :D
Dulcis Cantio chapter 10 . 7/21/2011
First and foremost, this is a lovely story and I have enjoyed it very much. I think you did a spectacular job portraying Sirius, as well as his bond with Harry. I like how you wrote Remus too, you expressed how conflicted he felt in a very realistic manner. Another thing I liked about your take on the characters was Ron's personality- I like how you made him the brother-friend, not some jealous prat. In this chapter you had a moment in Ron's perspective were he ponders "From the very first, even when he'd just learned that his companion was the famous Harry Potter, Ron had always seen the desperate need for the family that his friend had never had. And he deserves it, Ron thought to himself". I like how you didn't make him the bad guy. Your writing has a good rhythm and flow that made you story a delight to read, thanks for posting.
Flip Flops n Crop Tops chapter 10 . 5/29/2011
awwwwwwww the end almost made me cry!
V. L. Crawford chapter 10 . 2/5/2011
This was a wonderful story. I just wish there was more to it.
V. L. Crawford chapter 9 . 2/5/2011
This really is a great story. I just wish you would write more to it.
V. L. Crawford chapter 3 . 2/5/2011
I hate that they have to trust somebody else already.
V. L. Crawford chapter 2 . 2/5/2011
This is what should have happened.
V. L. Crawford chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
This is looking great so far.
Penny is wise chapter 10 . 1/15/2011
Awesome
galimeril chapter 10 . 1/8/2011
Aw, this was so cute. Very well-written, as always and I liked your interactions with 'the Hunters.' Props for another lovely piece!

galimeril ;D
1sunfun chapter 10 . 1/3/2011
Nice story.

CCAP
deleted2012 chapter 10 . 1/1/2011
I love this story, and I'm sad it's over already!
Jemma Blackwell chapter 10 . 12/28/2010
I really liked how Peter was brought out in the headmaster's office, much more professional and believable than the shrieking shack. I was terrified right up to the last minute that he was going to escape, the way they just carried him through the halls; I can't believe Minerva didn't put him in a cage and spare Ron's hands.

I could just feel Harry's terror growing every hour that Sirius didn't come home, and when I found out Voldemort had him I cried.

I will be on tenderhooks waiting to see how the rest of the world treats Sirius.
threecankeepasecret chapter 10 . 12/5/2010
Very good story!
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