I also wonder that is he really going to meet Jaden from duel academy
I am curious
Please if you ever think of an adea of writing more of the story, I do like to continue reading this fanfiction.

I really wonder that this will go straight to another yugioh characters from the future like juudai kun and his friends.
If it is I really look for word to see this novel advance.

well given Seto looks exactly the same in gx as the original, it makes sense...

This is brilliantly written and I haven't spotted any spelling or grammar mistakes. I only came across Yu-Gi-Oh! a few days ago and I know nothing about it but I absolutely love this! :D I like the way that you use different punctuation marks for each character! :) This is friggin awesome!

I personaly almost always dislike yaoi storys this one was so good I ignored that

no owari!

brittney

Very nice! I enjoyed this alot, another look into the immortality of the Yami/Hikaris (even if you used Seto/Set instead of Mariku/Malik)

Throughly enjoyed. 5/5

I don't know why, but I think this fanfic is absolutely beautiful. Darkish and sad, but still beautiful...

Fantastic piece of work D

I loved it, the way you wrote their stories, their emotions and reactions to their immortal lives.

Really, it was a very, very well written story.

Thank you so much for sharing it!

...oh my. This is so... perfect? Is that the word I am looking for? Sort of. Hautingly perfect. It's hard to explain... sigh. What would be nice as a sequel would be these three regaining a sense of normal back in their lives, and start watching over their friends' descendants... sort of like guardian angels... but sad too. Hauntingly perfect.

That's...wow. That could actually happen! And it was so sad, but so sweet at the same time! So much love!

*crying*

Wonderful, just wonderful. It has real emoution in it.

I don't think this even needs a sequel, it has a moral

of how the one thing most people want can hurt the

worse.

Awesome...

that was very good. And I wish I could write you more, but it's 1;30 in the evening, and quite frankly, I'm very tired.

It was really good!

That was a very moving and powerful piece of writing.

Well done. I've never thought about it like that before.

Hob x