Great chapter, as always!

YEEEEEET excellent writing as always!

HOW DID YOU WRITE THIS, SCREAMING CRYING AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH YOU TRULY UNDERSTAND THE SPIRIT OF HARRY POTTER YIPES AND YEETERS YOURE INSANE

YEEET THIS IS A WAR IN EARNEST

I see what you did there, though, ditching all of the OotP families like that -

Grouch... who all is even IN the Order? How big is it?

I think Harry's innocence and ignorance is symbolic of the fundamental change of this story - that Sirius was the Secret Keeper. Harry represents the people the adults are fighting for; childlike innocence and impatience and curiosity. As the war drags on, though, he learns more and more and less can be hidden. I wonder where it will stop. I know Harry can do things and I know he can help, but this story is not about children fighting.

A hush, a pause... a quiet breath. Wow.

YEET I was worried they'd come out in the middle of the Voldemort fight

Why didn't Alice transfigure August...erm...Louise? into a mouse, stick her in her pocket, then run like fuck?

omg Lee! i wonder what'll happen to him next?!

omg Susan and Luna!this is so sad! the aurors and marauders had so many opportunities to kill all three lestranges at multiple points. if they had, maybe fewer deaths would have happened

What on earth are you talking about, you have a section dedicated to fudge, about him saying an attack is impossible. He was clearly at the ministry in the last book of yours

I take it back, I don’t hate you! Thank goodness for your longtime reviewers posting comments on AO3! Otherwise, I’d still be cross with you! Cant wait to read these :)

the patrons would actually be their animagus form.

"Yet time would tell how wrong that thought was." I advise making your foreshadowing so obvious. It comes off as hokey. It's also rather unbelievable that Voldemort would sit down for a friendly chat with a chunk of Order members under any circumstances. It's weird and out of place. Otherwise enjoying the story!

Definitely sequel!