|Reviews for In Too Deep|
| riskeybusiness chapter 15 . 1/10
Ahhh I loved it. Perfectly original (for a fanfic of course :p)
| Melody chapter 15 . 5/9/2014
Oh, i just loved this story! It was a "page turner!" I really enjoyed the romance, and the true love between HG and SS. Absolutely wonderful!
| purefaith91 chapter 15 . 10/10/2011
Excellent! You should feel proud of your story. It is great. I also love Severus and Hermione together. Good move to have Harry somewhere else when Hermione woke up so that the drama did not get in the way of her new love. Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
| purefaith91 chapter 11 . 10/10/2011
Over reacting seems to be Hermione's way. She is at fault as she said as she led Harry on and let him become so involved with her that it was one more loss of a family for him. And a case could be made for her using him (for his fame), which is no different from those that did not profess to care for him. And then she took the coward's way out and ran. Shame on her and she was not a child, just young and had to know she was not being fair to Harry. Once again, poor Harry needs a hug. p
| purefaith91 chapter 10 . 10/10/2011
Go Severus. I was thinking the same thing when she took off by herself. She is supposed to be the brightest of her age, but she is not acting like it. Knowing what is at stake (her life as well as Harry's)
Can't wait to see what is behind all of this. p
| purefaith91 chapter 9 . 10/10/2011
Awww, Harry probably does not want to return to a world where Hermione is still gone from him. That is so sad. Where is Ron in all of this? Is he part of the reason Hermione left? Hopefully she will no longer dump the blame solely on SS. Lots to consider. p
| purefaith91 chapter 8 . 10/10/2011
Excellent, very original story. Poor Snape, he is EVERYONE'S whipping boy, as tragic a character as Harry. It will be interesting to see if Harry had to go so deep into the sleep to escape LV. It would suck to have your mind locked down and not be able to avoid LV still reaching him. I am really curious to find out what caused Hermione to leave the magic world. Somehow I don't see her parents getting killed as being the only thing as it had to be something she knew could happen. Very interesting. p
| Intense Stare chapter 15 . 4/28/2011
I really enjoyed this fiction, the story is great and your writing and grammer is brilliant. Something that I need in a story or it makes reading it unbearable.
My only critisim is that it moved to fast.
| Dana chapter 7 . 4/27/2010
WOW! That was cool and freaky at the same time! I was so not expecting that! Good Job
| mikomikko chapter 15 . 11/28/2009
cool plot! like it! you can extend each part of the plot a little bit. It seemed to be too short now. I suggest putting in maybe some flashbacks and more conversations. nicely written:)
| Someone aka Me chapter 15 . 11/11/2009
I love this story! It's fantastic!
| NoahIrene chapter 15 . 11/4/2009
| Supermegafoxyawesomehot7 chapter 3 . 6/23/2009
But But i don't get what happened.
| Ardastra chapter 15 . 4/19/2009
I truly enjoyed this little tale. It had a different storyline than most hg/ss and I really liked it. Well done.
| smwill28 chapter 4 . 8/13/2008
When reading a completed work I usually wait until the final chapter to review, but I couldn't this time. You have completely drawn me into this story. I want to know what has not been revealed. Why did she leave? Why is Snape acting like he is? The only thing that made since was when he stunned Hermione. I can't wait to read the rest.