Reviews for The Trail of the Black Star
Lynda chapter 3 . 10/22/2003
This is a pretty funny setting and plot for Severus and Harmione to be protrayed but it works well. I think you have the two of them in good character (especially Snape). The only thing I have trouble with is the suggestion that women seem to be attracted to him where ever he goes and that he has all these romantic interludes but I understand that it is part of the plot challange so I am ignoring it. I love the banter you provide between the characters! It is believable and makes them seem quite real.
F75 chapter 3 . 10/22/2003
very interesting. if you need some info about Peru, don't hesitate to ask me...
mavidian chapter 3 . 10/22/2003
I would gladly indulge a story like this The sophisticated, intelligent bantering is reward enough. Dead on character wise, too. Thanks for writing.
HunnySnowBunny chapter 3 . 10/22/2003
O! This sounds like it could become another one of my favorites. Amazon? I laughed so hard...and yet...I can see it. I don't know why...but I Can. Besides...if anyone could handle a snarky Potions's a know-it-all amazon!

I can't wait for more, and hope that you do update on a regular basis as you've said you would! _
sweetevangeline chapter 3 . 10/22/2003
This story is actually really fab - attention to detail, good storytelling and Amazon!Hermione. *grin* I'm surprised no one's talking about it, but regardless... I hope you'll update sooner rather than later.
Kngtzgrl chapter 3 . 10/22/2003
Your Author's Note at the beginning caught me by surprise. I literally did a double take when I read it! LOL. :D

I like the back and forth 'arguing' between Hermione and Severus. That was very well written. And that CHUMP sounds delicious!

Keep the chapters coming! "K"
La Rose Noire chapter 3 . 10/22/2003
Oh, my. Hermione grows up top be Lara Croft...interesting AND amusing take on the character(s). Rarely has an ethical discussion been so funny! I look forward to reading the rest of the story!
Feather Qwill chapter 2 . 10/21/2003
Lol. . . update soon!
llGeekGoddessll chapter 2 . 10/21/2003
Interesting story...I can't wait to see what happens next.
Kngtzgrl chapter 2 . 10/21/2003
I love it! In some ways it reminds me a little of the movie "Romancing the Stone". As long as you keep writing, I will definately keep reading! :D "K"
Romm chapter 2 . 10/21/2003
*grins* This looks like it'll be awesome.
wallyflower chapter 2 . 10/21/2003
It might be a late response, but it's one of the best. What a refreshing, completely unique (and not significantly OOC) take on Severus-and I believe I'm going to like Hermione, too.

Dare I hope that Johnson Palmer will soon find a happy ending?
The Great Pretender1 chapter 2 . 10/21/2003
I really am enjoying your story. The way you incorporated Severus Snape as the hero of the story is really awesome. Hermione as the amazon really was a stroke of genius. I love the banter between the two. I am glad this story is finished look forward to the rest of it.
clarity chapter 2 . 10/21/2003
This is a really well written story, which you no doubt already know. I'm looking forward to the rest.
Ans chapter 2 . 10/21/2003
Wonderfully well written. Can't wait for next chapter. Snape as the Indianna Jones type any and all ladies swoon over- brilliant. Exept Granger ofcource- even more brilliant.

Adventurous (me no native speaker in English, how ever did you guess)and funny at the same time. Throw in the romance and it will be Perfect with capital P!
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