Reviews for Point Blank
constant boredom chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Awesome story right there! I was laughing at every word the Battousai had to say xD and the ending was just plain adorable x3 You make incredible one-shots, y'know that? P
clara954 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Gotta love a pervy Battousai. Anyway, really funny story. My favorite part (besides the lime) was the pink gi. Keep writing!
SRAS9 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Very funny! Very light and good to put up the mood! Good story!
DarkenedStar chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Haha... I LOVE this story! It takes skill to make Battousai so funny. Adorable and hilarious. .
FenixPhoenix chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Love your portrayal of Battusai. It was hilarious! Good job!
Nixariel chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
So... If Kenshin has one hand on Kaoru's neck and one hand holding up her towel, what's holding up his towel? Ô.Ô

Heh heh heh.

Fun story, pretty well written, some interesting things going on with punctuation and capitalization, but overall I liked it.
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Lmfao.. Now that was funny XD

Ari chan
Kipcha chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Haha, that was pretty amusing, yet nice at the same time. Sounds like something Sano and Yahiko would do too :)
Katato2013 chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Ah, that was great. :) I loved all of Battousai's comments. He's funny. :)
MiekoYagyu chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
THIS IS AWESOME! I cracked up when I heard Battosai. He's Kenshin's conscious, albeit not a good one. I'm adding this to my favorites!
J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I don't really go for the split personality view of Kenshin, but in your hands? Funny! I liked the whole build up and the attack in the city resulting in a visit to Saito.
IrisedLuna chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Found this delightfully humorous story today, and all I have to say is: Ha.
tcl7189 chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
OMG! Frickin' hilarious!
Scarletpagan chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
wow i loved it especially the bit about his pink gi. i mean i v thought that it made him look gay for ages and its funny to hear someone actually comment on it :) i was hoping for a little bit more action with the whole bad men harassing women. there was quite a possibility to use that to advance the plot and i dont c the point of adding it in if its not used. jst a thought. really funny tho
Mad Hatter Massacre chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
So cute! Not to mention hilarious...

"Oro!" Kenshin muttered.

'Oro my ass. More like come one step closer and I will make you into a woman.'

Now that line had me suffocating on my own laughter...not to mention the "Hot Damn!" Battosai said near the end.

You were fantabulous with making such a serious character into a comedic one.

Great job!
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