|Reviews for Meetings of Chance|
| Lydia chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
I just wanted to tell you that I thought that your story was really awesome. I like how it is just onw of life's little moments. Those don't get written about very often. I thought it was really cool. good job.
| Matrix lover chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
This was good, but I noticed on your profile you mentioned being yelled at, and I thought I'd leave advice: if you left a harsh review, which I get the impression you may have, and I think you may have flamed a fanfic I read, maybe you need to try and word things a little... differently. I don't think Anna is a Mary Sue, but if I did, there would be two ways to tell you; I could say "Um, no offense, but this is a complete Mary Sue!" Or I could say, "hmm... I'd elaborate a little more on your character, because you could do a lot with her."
As for the fanfic itself, I really do like it! :)
| Jen.O.Cide chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
No offence, your writting was good, and I loved the description, but the way you portrayed Trinity. . .why would she say 'peoples'? I mean I say 'peoples' and I'm 13. There were just somethings that I thought were way off, things that I think she wouldn't say. But other than that nice fic. Pity you only got 3 reviews.
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| Madame Hyde chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
| MistyX chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
Hey, it's not weird NOR pointless!
Actually I really, really liked it. And I'm not a novice when it comes to this, I read between 5-30 fanfics a day, and have been a true N/T-follower since 99. But we're not reading this to talk about me, 'kay? ;)
Right when I started reading this story it caught my approval since you got into the story fast and you got that semi-quasy feeling of goodnes inside you.
Anna's story didn't seem farfetched or strange in any way, which parts like that in a fanfic have a tendancy to do. You felt with her, and got into the story. I liked Anna... If you're thinking about adding a chapter or so (which you really should), she should do a come-back. Pehraps meet Morpheus and congratulate him or something.
I also liked how you portrayed Neo. He was as he's in the films, very Neo-like. I instantly felt ahome with him. :)
I also liked the las part about Neo's verility, it was just the right amount of funnyness and brief sexual content. The romance in the beginning was sweet to read...
Keep up the good work and post another chapter, girl! And if it's anything my email's ... You're on my fav's now :)
| StarWarsNUT85 chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
Good job. Anna doesn't seem like a Mary-Sue to me. I kinda like Anna, mostly because she is NOT a ditzy, moronic "damsel in distress" type. Good job, K10 better than anything I could have ever written.