|Reviews for In the Beginning|
| theInfamousNeedle chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
nice! I like the last part “What a cute couple they make,” He said. yup, that part
| Agnes Green chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
you have a real knack for all this fluffy cuteness
i really enjoyed that. especially the interpritation.
where did you get that from?
| woofyy chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
aww! it's sweet! hahaha! welps good luckies with ur future stories! XD
| Zerya chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
| mandarin'peel chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
aw its so amazingly ADORABLE. Tomoyo lost her calm composure for a whole story! eheheh
| Trickmaster-lilica chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
I love it its so cute :D
| Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
KAWAII! Nadeshiko is adorable, I like how Eriol told the story and afterwards
| l.ngo0810 chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
| Gipsychan chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
In nadeshikos words: KAWAII!WAI! Beautiful one-shot! congrats!
| Kaley D. Oscope chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
OH! THAT WAS SO KAWAII! My favorite part of the story were the last three lines, they just came from a child's mind. Maybe CLAMP should read those lines so they can put Eriol and Tomoyo together! Bye!
| paper jam chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
lol! that was so funny and cute! and it hit me with a loud pak! hehehehehe _ nice job!
| psychedelic aya chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
Muwahahah! May napansin ako, ate... mahilig ka sa storya ni Adam and Eba... mweheheh! It was wonderful, though! .
| deity of death1 chapter 1 . 9/29/2004
*gushes* Nadeshiko is so cute! -
| afaphyte chapter 1 . 9/29/2004
SHUCKS! KAWAI! Ang cute talaga! As in! Nakakatuwa c Nadeshiko-chan! MUAHHAHAH! ET 4ever!
| N. Watanabe chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Ah! Sugoku kawaii! Awesome, awesome! I loved it SO MUCH! _