Reviews for In the Beginning
DarkWitch88 chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
Wow! That is so kawaii! But rather short but still the cutest one shot!
wingsoflove chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
why haven't i read this before? this is so cute and so romantic! what else can i expect from you, huh? )
WoLfePaWs chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
Wow, very cute! Nadeshiko-chan was very cute, don't you think? and Eriol and Tomoyo are very much like Adam and Eve...*chuckles* Love this story to bits*beams*
hey chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
aw! That's so cute.
fallen pheniox chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
LOL! How cute! That was hilarious though, I can't believe Nadeshiko just let out that Tomoyo and Eriol loved each other like that though, that's just hilarious. Since it's so embarassing. The ending for this was really cute, and the whole thing was really sweet. I like how Eriol had used Tomoyo for a way to explain to Nadeshiko why God had taken Adam's rib to make Eve, it was pretty funny, and I had never thought of that concept before. But wow did it make sense! It kicked ass, lol, anyways, this was definitely a great story, good luck with ur other ones, later!
GoddessLD chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
Yes indeed what a cute couple they make. Cute story.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
Syaoran no hime:
Wai, this fic is very thoughtful. Thought-provoking. Hehe, and no so repetitive from other one shots. Good job )
Most definitely, continue on with your writing!
Elesti chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
Waii! Nadeshiko is such a sweet child for writing an essay about his aunt and uncle! You are such a good author!
kimpster chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
aiyaa! i want more! aww this was a great fic, too bad it was to short *hint hint* cum bak with more amaizng fics neh?
Clarixe chapter 1 . 11/18/2003
Sa iyo pala ang isang ito...

Actually, pinirint ko na ito once nung wala pa akong sariling pc...

At kasama syang naka-compile with my Top Ten Fanfics...

This one is really great!

Nakakatuwa yung kinalabasan and besides unique yung plot...
Li Mei-chan chapter 1 . 11/17/2003
Haha Eriol is being seductive again! *sigh* just can't get enough of him! haha, lucky Tomoyo. Cute story! Nice job excellent use of words!

Mei
Cherished Dreams chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
such a great story... especially the end... keep up the great work...

smiLe,

ani-chan
arima yuchiro chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
wow...your story was incredibly beautiful. i love it! :)
Hiiragizawa Ao'jiro chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
You so have to tell me where you got that idea! I love it, it's so kawaii! I like TE so it's no wonder I appreciated it so much! (in real life, I really talk that way. Gomen Nasai!)
chibisakura chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
;_; SUGOI! SO BEAUTIFUL! _that was sweet and educational! _ please write another! and please e-mail me! :D baii baii!

chibisakura
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