|Reviews for In the Beginning|
| not applicable chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
This is really great! Wai, wai! And Nadeshiko is so cute.
That fic was really sweet. Sorry I can drop a long review, but I got to go! Bye!
| julyeighth chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
That's really kawaii! That was great! *pokes* LOL.. it would be interesting to see the afterface of this though...
| Star Katt chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
That was so kawaii! How cute! - I luv E T stories. Keep up the good work. l8r g8r
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
| Anime-mistress585 chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
NO! I'm the 7th reviewer! NO *makes mental note* check email more often...try every 10 minutes...*sighs* IT SO CUTE! E T Syaoran no Hime idead AWESOME FIC! (don'cha luv my scientific equation! *adjusts big glasses trying to look smart*) KEEP IT UP! *blinks and eyes widen* That what i was trying NOT to say...its ...corny! Sappy! Chesey! Unlike your wonderful ficcy! One of my favorite couples! *grins and begins begging* more stories! please! If i beg hard enough will you? PLEASE
| bunnyluvrchan chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
This is really good! I just saw one eensy mistake: pinning is like pinning someone to the ground. I this "pining" is the word you're looking for, with only one "n." It might've been a typo, but little things like that bug me, and I'm all for ridding the world of grammar and spelling errors. The story is refreshingly unique- I love the Bible relevance.
| KyteAura chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
Ka-wa-ii...Almost as sweet as the hot chocolate I just gulped down...Too bad I added like 5 packs of sugar O.o
| Lttlwings chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
“Listen, Nadeshiko. God didn’t get the woman from a man’s foot because a woman is not meant to be stepped on. He didn’t get her from the man’s back either, because she is not meant to be a burden.” Eriol got up and suddenly took Tomoyo’s hands and placed them on her chest. “He took her from here- under his arm so she could be protected by a man’s strong arms, and near his heart where she would rule him.”
This sentence was the most beautiful thing I ever read! If any man said that to me I would fall into his arms and kiss him right away! Those are such beautiful words!
I would like to say that I luv, adore all of u'r ET fics! They are my fav CCS couple, and to knwo that u write about them makes me glad! Not onyl are the plot amazingly well written, but everything is so enjoyable to read!
I must say that I am glad to have encountered u'r fics! Plz continue on with the amazing job
| VanillaMoose4132 chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
AWE! Too KAWAII! but that was soo sweet! write more stories like that!
| flitter bug chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
aww..cute one shot! great job! ]
| Carmela-chan chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
Very Kawaii! _ So sweet. Nice ET one shot. Great job! Ja ne!
| LighthawkKnight chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
hehe... cute. Wow I never thought about Adam and Eve that way... nice!
| midnight blue chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
kawaii fic. keep up the good work. just one question. are you a christian or something? you know awful lot about the bible and all. anyway, good job on the writing and everything.