Reviews for The Mating Game
Claude Amelia Song chapter 5 . 4/15/2020
I love this story! This chapter made me smile so much. I love it.
lilsis15 chapter 23 . 7/2/2019
Great story, very well written.
Annon chapter 5 . 12/16/2018
I love that Snape had his house elf respond to his proposals. It was very funny and perfectly wriiten.
RockfordGirl26 chapter 1 . 12/4/2018
I absolutely love this story! Great job!
jenkent chapter 23 . 8/22/2018
When I started this story, I thought it would be close to the marriage law stories I've read, I was wrong. You took a very unique spin. I enjoyed it very much. Some of it was hard to read since my husband and I are still in the trying phase of starting a family, but I think that's also what made me like it. It was fiction but had the heart of true stories in it. I hope that makes sense. Anyway, great job and sorry for my rambling.
Guest chapter 23 . 6/17/2018
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story.
Bmxknsl chapter 14 . 8/28/2017
Honestly, I've hated hermione's attitude all through this. It's like she and Snape have switched characteristics. She's been an ass more of the time. It's saddening.
Guest chapter 23 . 6/7/2017
Beautiful story!
Guest chapter 23 . 5/6/2017
To much fluff. Then again i must not complain. Yet i do. There should not be a dead child and that was it. There should be 1unhappy lesbian ; 1child severely disabled ; 1really unhappy marriage with unhappy children. At least.
Yet fluff. Yet, you are to good a writer to just write fluff... Then again, who am i to complain...
Thank you :-)
Guest chapter 18 . 5/6/2017
That is a good name. Thanks.
Guest chapter 17 . 5/6/2017
Yeah, sure, NOT.
Minerva and Hermione and maybe Albus will care for the children at day, and Severus at night.
Second, you should not name a firstborn Quintus, which is fifth son. At least call him Primus.
Guest chapter 12 . 5/5/2017
Thank you for writing this story. It is fluffy and uh, logical :-)
So i tell you:
"respondez, s'il vous plait" actually does mean: "Please send an answer".
i guess Draco would know that, so he would not double the sentence.
See this tiny critique? It means i think the other things are great.
AiymaSnikies chapter 15 . 4/16/2017
How the he'll do toy pronounce The babies names
wine witch chapter 23 . 2/1/2017
Nice, enjoyable story, thank you!
Guest chapter 23 . 1/27/2017
I'd have to say that this is my favorite marriage law fic. I loved the way you wrote Hermione and Severus through all their trials and joys. Thank you so much for sharing!
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