Reviews for Begging For You
HadFun chapter 1 . 5/20/2017
A pretty gud plot... I had my heart thumping all the tym
kaley the vampire lover chapter 14 . 11/4/2009
sequel sequil sequil seqil plz
mamawar chapter 14 . 3/14/2006
LOVED IT! though chapter 13 made me go all "WTF? I'M TOTALLY LOST" ;

very well written and has a good plot! X3
tykaimistress chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
GO Timber,go Timber

It's your birthday...

Okay it's not really your B-Day but you know what i mean

Anyway,that was a great story

I think i'll read it okay!
DragonMaster232 chapter 14 . 5/26/2005
I vote have a sequel _.
wownothanks chapter 12 . 5/23/2005
WOW! I'm slow! Anyways, great fic! _
Joy.O chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
Kitsuryuu chapter 14 . 11/6/2004

Amy Lee: You always cry at sweet endings.

Kit: Unlike you I happen to have a sensitive taste for great stories!

Amy Lee: I love her fic, but you don't see me crying!

Kit: :p

Amy Lee: -_-

Kitsuryuu chapter 7 . 11/6/2004
I loved this part:

(Chapter 6

The Engagement and the Elevator

Kai fidgeted a lot. This outfit did NOT suit him.

Or anyone else for that matter.

Damn that neko-jin and his sugar turtle.

/Sugar turtle? HAH! Even I could do better than that!/

/Dranzer, if you don’t want to be left behind and stuffed down my socks, I advise you to zip it/

/You don’t have any socks/

/Figure of speech, so zip it/

/Shutting up/

Kai sighed. He was wearing a black silk button-up shirt with silver buttons and border around the collar. He was also wearing a pair of loose black pants that were made out of a similar material and a silver chain-link belt. He had left the top two buttons on the shirt undone at Dranzer’s insistence and had left the hem out so he ended up looking very, very sexy (please note the very).

He was more worried about when Tyson sees his outfit.

/Don’t worry. I’m sure he’ll drool/

/Didn’t I tell you to shut up?/

/Yes, but since when have I actually listened to you?/

/Beyblade battles?/

/That’s only ‘cause I’d hate to see you cry when you lose/


/Is it just me and are you more temperamental than usual?/

That statement brought Kai back to Earth. Dranzer was right; he was more edgy than usual.

Why does Tyson have this effect on him?

Even when they started out together, he had been attracted to the blunette. Now that he’s back, Tyson’s having an even STRONGER affect.

/Come on Kai, you’ll be late/

/I wonder why they’re having it so early?/

/Probably so that they can leave before Mariah shows up/

/You have a point there/

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“Is everything ready, Max?
Kit chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
No! I will review! This is my computer Amy Lee.

Pixie Sticks is a 99.9% sugar loaded sweet. Something I need at a daily basis.

Kitsuryuu chapter 4 . 11/6/2004

But I need to tell her, her fic was awesome.

NO! Finsish story now!

You spelled Fi
Kitsuryuu chapter 3 . 11/6/2004
Amy Lee: KIT!

Kit: I can't help it! Max... and elevator cameras!

Amy Lee:...

Kit: And Kai and Kenny's line in when they were at the Bey Stadium.

"To the Hospital of course."

"But I haven't told you were it is!"


Amy Lee: On with the story! Do you need your inhaler Kit?
Kitsuryuu chapter 2 . 11/6/2004
I really like Max.

He's exactly like me.

Amy Lee: You're just psychopathic.

Kit: Who told you to use my computer to review?

Amy Lee: Reviewing is boring. Let's just finish the story forst then you review.

Kit: Fine... See you in the nect few chapters.

Amy Lee: Until the end.

Kit: I swear if you werne't my best friend.

Amy Lee: You spelled 'weren't' wrong.
Kitsuryuu chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
I know this tittle...

Fate of the Forest (one of your reviewers) is my half- sister, by anything except blood and law. We even act alike... No wait, that's wrong, Fate is Hyper and I'm Psychopathic... Oh Well. She loved your fic and sent it to me. I never had a chance to read it... hehe! (blushes in embarrasment)

Anyway it's just the first chapter but I think Kai made a huge mistake so I'm going to find out. BY READING THE WHOLE FIC!

Oh BTW, I wanted to write this in any review but I keep for getiing.

Your fic 'The Author Adventure' has chapters that start with O. Did you know that?

Amy Lee: She made the fic you ignoramus!

Kit: Is there even such a word?

Amy Lee: (bonks Kit) Look it Up!
Snow Angel chapter 8 . 7/11/2004
ROFL! _ Beautifully done. Thank you.
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