Ohmygosh so I opened this fic on a whim, and WOW what a whirlwind! Simply brilliant, I am so in love with JamesxJack! So disappointed to realise it's not finished over 11 years ago :/

Once again, quite late in getting into this pairing. But thank you. Oh my word this was hilarious and I love it

Just so wish you could continue this story. One of the best 2 sparrington fanfic I have ever read.

...and you certainly helped to expand my English vocabulary.

A really wonderfull piece of writing. I Loved reading it. The tension between Jack and James is just so available!

I'm looking forward to read a new chapter, which will be hopefully updated soon.

Greetings

stromy

P.S I apologize for my bad english. I'm german after all and I am just not able to express, what i really wanted to say about this story!

laksdjf;lsj SO GOOD. I absolutely love this fic. Reminds me scarily of Lies of Locke Lamora book 2, but with Norrington's acerbic tongue narrating things, I'm enjoying this much more. Please do write more soon! I'll be looking forward to an update!

~firedraygon97

Is that a Fight Club reference in here? I think one of James' rants seem similar to Marla...

Awesome story, humor and slash with my fav pairing of POTC! Its never too late to update, you know Please continue this? Would really like to see more of the Sparrow-Lark grudge, and Bennet hopefully being ruined by the Ebony Sharks or James himself. Or we can just have Jack ruin him XD Please continue!

plz write more! I wanna find out what happens next!

god, i can't believe you haven't updated such a brilliant fic.

Link...linkage...on your profile...not..._working_!

I know you had this...somewhere else! Please? I need link...

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. . . This is severely awesome. It's Sparrington that makes SENSE (a rare thing indeed). And there's a plot to go along with the romance? OMG,that's awesome! Congrats!

You know, when I read this, I can't help but wonder what everyone else on the ship thought when Norrington started yelling 'HANDS! HANDS, SPARROW!'

ACK! Update SOON! This is awesome, I love it. It's funny, romantic and really well written. the only critiscism I can make is that you should split it into smaller chapters, instead of just having one REALLY long one. Other than that, this is absolutely amazing, probably one of the best PotC stories I've ever read - that includes the prequel to this too. Anyway, please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

I love this story so much! I know it's been a long time since you wrote it, but I really hope you'll continue it sometime.

please finish this story. it is my favourite and personly the only good jack/norrington pairing yet. your story is actualy what got me into that please update soon.

This is most definitely the funnest thing I've read in a long time. Your Norrington's narration is just so.. ugh. I love it. He's witty, he's.. just so NORRINGTON.

I LOVE YOU.

And, and, and... there's just so many funny, cute moments. It's like the movies. But with slash.

And at the end? Where James and co. sang the pirate song on the Pearl? L.O.L!

I cannot begin to explain all the things I love about this story, since it was very long and I read "Men of Our Word" AND this one all the way through. .. *cough*. It's 3am, and I'm off to read the third one. aha.

Adding to favs.

-RA, out