Reviews for The Visible Invisible
Marjorie chapter 5 . 10/28/2021
OMG, wouldn't it be cool if Gabrielle turned out to be bad and Harry slowly started to fall for Ginny?
But Ginny will have moved on, because how much pining/waiting can a girl take?!
Elmira chapter 1 . 1/3/2020
Harry Potter books were my favorite during my teens due to that I read many of the fan fictions while waiting for each book to be published. After years passed by I still ready the original books themselves once in awhile and this fan fictions is the only one that I reread again again. Thank you for your amazing writing
MissWM chapter 44 . 10/15/2019
Wow! This surpassed all of my expectations. Really enjoyed it :)) gotta say, though, the scenes with the "wandless magic" confrontation were a tad bit hard to gasp, buttt overall, everything was pretty amazing. and i loved the way you ended it, it fit very well with the storyline!
ps: i saw that you did write a sequence, but that is unfinished, so i won't be stoping by there, even tough this ending did leave me wanting for more!
secret lisa chapter 44 . 6/23/2018
I loved this. Read from start to finish. It had everything. Pace was great. Characters believable. Insightful and so beautifully written.
I do hope you reappear at some stage to update your other wonderful stories
Well done you on this one
KashIsle chapter 44 . 6/14/2017
I read this a few months back and I guess I didn't leave a review. This was a great fic with a great plot and writing. The characters, emotions are just so right. Can't believe it was written in 2003. Thank you so much for writing this story. I hope you get back to writing DG fics again or writing in general if you aren't. :).
Guest chapter 10 . 6/10/2017
Nice chap
parinaz chapter 1 . 6/4/2017
oh my god. i read the persian translated version of this story over 10 years ago...they translated 20 chapter of it and kept us waiting and waiting. and we never got to read the remaining chapters... back then my english was not good enough. i couldnt read english books.. i was 14. now im 26 and ... now its like im 14 again..i want to finish what i started. i just wanted to thank you for this great story and for the great days you gave me with my favorite characters in my teenage days...
tryntee13 chapter 44 . 9/15/2016
this was soo good! my first time reading your work. I couldn't stop reading. I loved all the drama and action. Fantastic job!
Whaaaaaaaa chapter 9 . 11/9/2014
Viginia?! What did the come from. Its ginerva.
shinystar19yay chapter 44 . 5/23/2013
Interesting plot! But unfinished.
ShinyBrightStar chapter 44 . 5/3/2013
Hi there!

I know it's been a long time since you've finished this story and you probably won't see this comment, but I had to write it!

In 2005, I read a fanfiction translated to my language and I fell in love with it! It was this story...

I always wanted to read the original version, but somehow I never tried to find it and finally after all these years I forgot that I wanted to search for it.

Yesterday, I was looking at some old PDF files (mostly fanfics) on my laptop and then I saw that translated fanfic of yours, and I was like: Damn! It's been so long...

I searched the story on google and in a second , I was on your page! I read the whole thing in English again and I have to say that I LOVE THIS!

You're awesome and talented, and this is probably on my top10 fanfics of all time! (not just HP)

I hope you read this comment one day, and know that you have a fan that read your story in 2 languages!

PS: I saw you wrote a sequel but it's not complete... I wish you continue it someday...

dyk3adellic chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Decided to start reading this while I wait for you to update your other story. This seems great. There are a few errors in here, but nothing too bad. I like how it's started.
Anelya chapter 44 . 4/28/2012
I've just read this whole story, and I love it!

It's cute, adorable, and a perfect Draco/Ginny. Also I love the way you write!

Can't wait till you update CIC!
OCEANS TO LAZY 2 LOGIN chapter 44 . 1/24/2012
Mitra Laramie chapter 44 . 12/11/2011
fantastic story- spent all day reading it!
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