Reviews for The Visible Invisible |
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Ezmerelda chapter 43 . 10/31/2004 The only frustration I feel is the frustration brought on by the character's continued misunderstandings and wild jumps to incorrect conclusions. Can't wait to see how you resolve all of this! Thanks for writing! ~"~ |
Lady Angelique of mystiqu chapter 43 . 10/31/2004 wow this is good. Only one more chapter. I'm happy it'll be all resolved soon ut sad it'll be ending. Update soon! It had better be only a week! |
pawzzz chapter 43 . 10/31/2004 Just one more? *sniff* but..but...can we at least have an epilogue after? Please, pretty please with a cherry on top?... Anyway now that I'm done begging, lovely chapter as always. I'm glad to see that Ginny's come to her senses about the act and given up on her manichean outlook on the world she was starting to aggravate me. Not that it was bad, it was a great part of the story but I can't help getting a little aggravated with the characters when they do stupid things :D (sorry about the "big" word but I just learned it in English and was delighted to find that I could actually use it for this, I'm a little weird like that - ) Keep up the good work. |
BurningIce22 chapter 43 . 10/31/2004 hey..no it hasn't dragged on too long at all! great chappie..im in a rush..but awesome job, ill b sad for it to end..update soon ~burningice |
A-lien V-ision chapter 43 . 10/31/2004 you updated *stares in shock* you updated... and I am now going to haunt you on Halloween with a blunt knife, so I can pretend to kill you because you left the story like this. With a not-too-bad-cliffie-but-bad-enough. UPDATE SOON! Happy Halloween! |
jugular chapter 43 . 10/31/2004 I can't wait until the next chapter. :D you're a great writer and I love this story. |
CS June chapter 43 . 10/31/2004 Great new chapter. It's been a while since you last updated but I am still here! Awesome work and can't wait till the next chapter! |
Aly chapter 7 . 10/27/2004 I really like it |
Hello chapter 1 . 10/24/2004 the story's really nice and original.. Very well crafted.. BUT the update seems to be taking forever! |
mima chapter 42 . 10/17/2004 poor draco! well he's certainly in for it now! |
Alise Devay chapter 42 . 10/16/2004 Aw, that's so sweet, what Darien did I mean, even if it was all dark and secrety. And I couldn't hate you, because I just know there is more to come. Can't wait to read it. I like this chapter, it explains a lot and it makes me want to know what'll happen between Draco and Ginny now. Also, the mood of this chapter really fit with the weather outside today. I know this wasn't because of you or anything, but I thought I'd share. :) ~windowfaerie |
LoStAnGeL911 chapter 1 . 10/9/2004 hey me again but this time im logged in just want you to write |
alie johnston chapter 42 . 10/8/2004 you cannot end it here i have been reading this story for about 4 or 5 says on and off i look forward to your stories! I cannot just stop reading it! its such a cliff-hanger! omg but it is awesome! please pleasse when you get the next chapter please send me an update i dont know how to do that yet! but ill find out sooner or later i suppose. lol. neways its a real good plot and carry out i am going to start reading your others, but i need to know what happens to draco and ginny, (and ron and hermione) yup! somethings there i just don't know what it is yet i always believed that they would end up together. just send me the reveiw ok? have fun ~sorry if i came on a little strong but my days have been stressful and i look forward to sitting down and reading this! ~love always your number one admirer alie from shreveport |
Esus chapter 42 . 10/8/2004 Oh, I don't hate you... but that "yet" scares me a bit. :P! It seemed that everything's gonna be alright, and now they fought again. Really, they'll make me mad! You explained very well Ginny's confusion, her new way of looking at the world that scares her. Probably, seeing everything just black & white would be easier, but I can understand Draco's POV. But, for her it was too much difficult: how could someone understand a son that allowed to kill his father, even if he was a crazy muggle murderer and a Death Eater? Well, betrayin family is a big crime, but none could decide upon other lifes. So, I wanna really see what will happen in London, now! p.s. I've promised you that I'd post the review to the last chapters again, but I take them for D&G site, just to make you wait a little :P |
GoldenFawkes chapter 42 . 10/5/2004 I don't hate you. :-D Waiting for the "more to come"! |