Good story~ Much enjoyed~

I loved his ploy :p

I can actually feel ginny's frustration in this chapter. How Ron, Harry and Hermoine, who are just a year older to her, keep doing dangerous things, but if she just goes to another country with Malfoy, they create a havoc. Irritating!

I really enjoyed this chapter :) I love how Malfoy got so angry when Ginny just didnt react :) It was just like the Draco we know

I actually wanted Gabrielle to be a scheming brat so that Harry would fall for Ginny and realize what he had thrown away :)

Loved this line:

"Shut up, Malfoy and sit down, because we are not finished here," she said coolly, evenly and with a great deal of authority.

Make Harry fall for Ginny.. And ofcourse then Ginny should not want him anymore! :p

*Goes to the next chapter*

Im enjoying this :D

Not trying to be overly critical (because I wholly enjoyed the story), but she forgave him awful fast for nearly ruining her career. Personally (and as a female), it would take a lot more than someone hiding in my office that same night telling me that I 'belong' to them to get me to melt. Just sayin...

This is... an amazing fanfiction.

Today I was scanning through a list of "favourite stories" compiled by one of my favourite fanfic authors. The Visible Invisible was on there, as a completed fic, and I decided to have a look at it.

I couldn't stop reading.

Ginny/Draco isn't my favourite 'ship - I prefer Dramione - but this one is good enough to merit the effort. Realistic relationships, real people, an excellent plot, original thinking; these are the things that I love, and these are the things that I found. It's writing like this that makes me keep working on my own fanfics.

Five stars.

I really enjoyed this (although I was tempted to flame for you having made Neville evil). Thanks for writing!

great story!

This story was full of surprises! I thought that this would just be fun, sexy, political backstabbing but the plot and the action blew me away. As always, Draco and Ginny's relationship played out very nicely and I loved all the plot twists, cliffhangers and politics involved in this fic. I did find the characters' motives kind of shaky, especially Neville's and Danika's, and after a while, the Malfoys' duty to the unicorns became a bit too fairytale and like "WE HAVE TO SAVE THE UNICORNS!". But the rest of the story was great - you're a really good writer.

Wow. I loved this story. As I said in a previous review, it is not very often that a fanfiction is able to catch me unawares but you did several times and it was wonderful. D/G is my favorite ship and I thought I'd seen it all, but I'm very glad you proved me wrong. The farther into the story I went the more real they got. It is very impressive! The magic followed close enough to the Potterverse but added something new to spice it up. And your extension on the Malfoys was lovely. While I thought the ending a bit anticlimactic, I can see why you ended it there. It reminded me of the part of their relationship that intrigued me the most. Your description of their connection after she fixes the shield was, for lack of a better word, magical. I got shivers _ So ending like that makes sense. And Ron finally coming to his senses was adorable, btw.

Keep writing!

with luck and love

-Lady C

bwahaha. that was lovely. I have read a lot of fanfiction (no really, a LOT) and you are the first to surprise me in a long time. I expected Darien to be not what he seemed but I didn't expect you to let on so soon, nor for there to be such an understanding between him and Draco. I also really enjoy your characterization of Ginny. Not only is she complicated on the surface but she's complicated underneath too, and she keeps the mask up even when by herself. Kudos to you (with chocolate chips!)!

I look forward to finishing reading _

with luck and love

Lacy C