Reviews for The Visible Invisible
Violet Waller chapter 37 . 11/2/2008
I've been plowing through this story for days. It's like a good dose of chocolate. I didn't have time to review after each chapter, but I just ... melted when I read the part about "not for me"

I think the thousand cherubs around me were squeeing in delight. I had to review. So there. Your story is the BEST story in every way.
riotgirllina chapter 44 . 7/10/2008
Loved the story!

Haha I picked up on the American Presidnet similarities right at the end when they were explaining they didn't shoot down the legislation for one another.

Well done!
SelenaLupin chapter 7 . 6/9/2008
I'm too lazy to sign in.

Why aren't you using Ginerva instead of Virginia?
Leali Black chapter 26 . 5/18/2008
Hmm, I'm not sure if I liked the way you made Ginny react to Draco's speach to Ron about him and Ginny being a couple is just a lie. Ginny told Ron herself that it wasn't real. She should know that Draco is just covering both their tails, like she did.

Other than that, excellent work!
cranberry148 chapter 44 . 5/13/2008
Great story! Nice Job
AceCade chapter 13 . 3/14/2008
OMG Awesome Cliffie!

-AceCade
AceCade chapter 12 . 3/9/2008
Awesome!

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AceCade chapter 11 . 3/9/2008
I KNEW IT! Draco is one smart cookie lol

-AceCade
AceCade chapter 10 . 3/8/2008
Awesome! Hopefully Hermione will get a clue. is Michael Michael Corner, one of the dudes Ginny dated?

-AceCade
AceCade chapter 9 . 3/8/2008
Awesome!

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AceCade chapter 8 . 3/8/2008
AWESOMELY AMAZING!

-AceCade
AceCade chapter 7 . 3/8/2008
Awesome!

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AceCade chapter 6 . 3/8/2008
I loved this whole Ginny/Draco interaction.

And Gabrielle reminds me of an evil Pansy or Millicent, or Daphne.

-AceCade
AceCade chapter 4 . 3/8/2008
Loved it!

-AceCade
AceCade chapter 5 . 3/8/2008
Awesome!

Watch your run on sentences and commas.

-AceCade
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