| Reviews for The Visible Invisible |
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   AceCade chapter 3 . 3/8/2008 I knew it was him! -AceCade |
| AceCade chapter 2 . 3/8/2008 Awesome again. -AceCade |
| AceCade chapter 1 . 3/8/2008 Awesome -AceCade |
| Bahar chapter 1 . 10/17/2007 your story is wonderfull and Im so sorry that JKrowling didnt rea your story before writing her book . I believe that she must change the personality of malfoy in her story but she didnt and made very weak story |
| demented-dreamer chapter 44 . 7/2/2007 Wow - great fanfic! I loved the whole political theme - not only was it a quite new/unexplored angle but you made it seem that writing it was effortless and politics interesting. The whole Act/unicorns in Bulgaria was a greatly written plot. Ah the Ginny/Draco energy thing was exciting! |
| demented-dreamer chapter 33 . 7/2/2007 Ahh! Was just going to review at the end after I'd finished reading but i just wanted to tell you before i forgot that i absolutely loved the line "This resposibility is mine. And so is she." |
| PrincessOfIllFate chapter 6 . 12/12/2006 At this point in the story, I really am hoping that Ginny just breaks up Harry's engagement to that whore. xD. But anyway, it's coming along nicely :) |
| PrincessOfIllFate chapter 5 . 12/12/2006 Even more interesting! Does Harry know something Ginny Doesn't? Or... is he just being the Same Harry he has always been, thinking Malfoy is just Evil at the core? I guess I shall read on and find out xD |
| PrincessOfIllFate chapter 1 . 12/12/2006 Interesting. I just read all that you had written of Crossing Into Chaos last night, and I was so absolutely smitten with it that i decided I MUST read the rest of your fics. I like how this one started. Anyway yes, I tried to leave a rather long and thoughtful Review on CIC but my internet explorer messed up and didnt' save it, so I just wanted to try again and say that that fic was so wonderfully true to character, especially for being an AU and i think it's developing MARVELOUSLY... I really cannot wait for you to update it! |
| harrypotterchick4ever chapter 44 . 11/20/2006 i loved this story! it was so great had what every good story has excellent plot characters detail and writing i love love loved it i hope to read more from you although i might have already i'm not too sure anyways great job! |
| harrypotterchick4ever chapter 22 . 11/20/2006 well i was going to wait for the end of the story to review ecause i haev just started reading it but i couldn't resist on this chapter it's so grat so far this chapter really does tell us why you named your story the visible invisible it's so smartly written so far I have never read a long d/g story that has a well thought out plot, like this and isn't far fetched great job i can't wait to rad the rest hey by the way this is hafway isn't it? |
| angel-tears-16 chapter 12 . 7/20/2006 If that's all it takes for her to get out of a panic attack she is very, very lucky, usually I have to be sedated. |
| walkin-on-cloud-9 chapter 44 . 7/5/2006 Wow! Great story! I love it! Though you left some big holes in the end. Like, what happens to Neville, and Bulgaria. If you could just answer those, I'd be gratefull. Good story from a good writer! I love the realness of the story, and it had me on the edge of my seat the whole time! |
| the14potter chapter 44 . 6/23/2006 This was a very great story, I enjoyed reading it! But it seemed like it could have ended so many times. And how do the readers know that Draco and Ginny won't get in a fight over something really small and split up again? Over all the story was fabulous, I really really loved it! :) Keep Writing! |
| Bombka chapter 36 . 6/4/2006 Story is quite nice, but there is a big mistake. Ginny wasn't the Heir of Slytherin. Tom Riddle was and he was manipulating her. :/ So why do all of the character in your story think that she was really? |