Reviews for The Visible Invisible |
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lady of scarlet darkness chapter 7 . 10/31/2003 DAMMIT...the chapters ran out just when it was getting good...please update soon...your story is very interesting and i love the way that ginny is...cold as ice but burning with passion...good job |
Hope chapter 7 . 10/31/2003 Cliff hanger? Why? Why must you do that! That's the cruelest thing you could possibly do! And yeah, your Draco is way out of cannon, we need to see more selfish prat...or dangerous Draco, gotta love a dangerous Draco! Keep writing, because I need to know what happens. Write more. |
captnaimerica chapter 7 . 10/31/2003 good god god |
nutsaboutremus chapter 6 . 10/29/2003 excellent build up of tension.. Point noted,, wil wait for Gabrielle's behavior to have a reason.. Go Ginny...Go you of course.. |
Moranar chapter 6 . 10/29/2003 Interesting. Also, teensy suggestion. It's great that you post four chapters at once and all but you'll get less reviews that way and less precise criticism. The Harry/Gin thing is odd. Never supported it. Also, what's going on with Gab? Hmm. Update. |
geranosaurus chapter 6 . 10/29/2003 :) I like your story. It's pretty good. I like the way you have Ginny. She sounds like me, never on time. (With me, I have time but not memory!) Anyway, PLEASE write more chapters so I have more to reveiw. :) *~*Yukura*~* |
T.H.W chapter 5 . 10/28/2003 Hello! I found your author's name through your review on Corridore's story and I'm so glad I checked it out! Ordinarily, I review every chapter that's presented, but...*whispers* that's when I'm not supposed to be working. ;) So yes, I'm at work and I'm absolutely enthralled with your story! It's fantastic! I would say more, but...you wouldn't want me to get in trouble, would you? :) Keep writing PLEASE! This is going on my faves list, just so ya know. ;) Great work! T.H.W. |
Nutsaboutremus chapter 5 . 10/28/2003 I really really like where the story is going but i think you should play down the harry giny history/chemistry..cos im makes readers like me torn between wanting Ginny to get together with either Harry or Draco..Other than that fabolous.. OH and the bit about Gabirle threatening Ginny..doesn put Harry's fince in good light does it? Puts Ginny is good light maing her the 'better' spouse for Harry.. Other than that fatastic..love your writitng style and bringing in the diplomacy..I think being a diplomat is damn cool..Keepwriting... |
captnaimerica chapter 4 . 10/27/2003 good god god |
RyokoJesseandFiend chapter 4 . 10/27/2003 this is great so far! write more soon! |
GoGinnyGo chapter 4 . 10/27/2003 This is a very promising start, Emeraleyes! This fiancee of Harry's, Gabrielle, looks rather "two-faced" now, doesn't she? Anyways, keep up the good work~ :-) |
starryn1ght chapter 44 . 11/27/2004 I loved the ending to this fic. It fit the story very well. I can't believe that it's all over now! I really enjoyed reading this. I'm definitely going to have to check out your other stories now. You are such an amazing writer. |