Reviews for The Visible Invisible |
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hoppers chapter 44 . 11/20/2004 This is really good, and I'm so sad it's done :( I loved reading this story, and following along. Great job, and I can't wait to read your new stories! |
Lady Angelique of mystiqu chapter 44 . 11/20/2004 aww, that was so cute! And now it's over! *cries* It's bittersweet! So now that this story is over with, you can go and finish the pilgrim badge! Oh yeah! |
sycoticatalyst chapter 44 . 11/19/2004 Beautiful chapter! I absolutely loved it. It's so sad, though, this being the last chapter and all. It's fine, though. You done good with the ending. Is far better this way. :) Am uberly tired right now, though. Completely wiped out, can't do anything. I need sleep. Can't say much in the way of reviews. Or craziness. Sad. Maybe I'll go comment in your LJ a bit more... but not right now. -Syco |
Jade Summers chapter 44 . 11/19/2004 Merlin, it feels as if a piece of my life has been completed, and Im defintely NOT feeling, well, unfufilled in any way. I'm looking foreward to any and all work that is D/G related in the future, and I know they will be as good-or better, than this fiction. Then again, if you want to surpass this fine work of art, you're goning to have to try your hardest. Good Luck and thank you! Always Sleepless in my Seattle- Jade Summers |
Ezmerelda chapter 44 . 11/19/2004 I liked the ending, it was so...them. I agree with your Author's note that mushy, tear-laden declarations of eternal love would have been terribly out of place for this particular incarnation of Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy. To rephrase an old quote, be true to thy characters. Great story, thanks for writing! ~"~ |
excentrykemuse chapter 44 . 11/19/2004 hey! I knew at the end that you had watched THE AMERICAN PRESIDENT ;) I absolutely love that film. Anyway, I read your entire story (except for the last chapter that you published today) when I was sick in bed about two weeks ago. Even though I was "technically" supposed to be sleeping, I couldn't tear my eyes away from it. I was even up all night! Please write more D/G (as I know you plan to) and I liked the ending. I love how it's not a perfectly wrapped package. good luck in your future writing endeavors! |
mimasoo chapter 44 . 11/19/2004 huge hugs for finishing. loved it. good clean ending. must be hard to give up. hugs again. |
CS June chapter 44 . 11/19/2004 Ah! That was wonderful! Great chapter and Ginny's speech was well written. |
Cat chapter 44 . 11/19/2004 Wow! It's all over now! I cannot believe it! Wah! I wasn't sure if the end was the end, but it did sound like an end a bit. Hehe, it's good you told us it's the end. I read 2 other fanfics recently, and I didn't know their end was the end.. and kept waiting for the next chapter. Found out it was the end a bit later, and felt a little stupid. Hahaha. |
sycoticatalyst chapter 43 . 11/15/2004 Finally finished reading this... Now hurry and update! Well, okay, don't hurry. I spose I can read your other fics til then. Should be enjoyable :) I like reading. I love the development of Ron! Moreso than Ginny or Malfoy, cause the foreground characters are expected to develop, but the background characters you don't see as much. Awesome work! And you've kept this up for nearly 13 months? 43 (almost 44) chapters. Dear lord. I'd have given up by now, lol. But I'm a lazy bum, soo.. But on to your other stories. Must keep up the reading, specially since I have to leave soon for art. -Syco |
sycoticatalyst chapter 33 . 11/13/2004 Wait... You mean it wasn't obvious to everyone that it was Neville? Oy vay. Hell, I knew who both the people were. Not right away, of course (was guessing Danika was the guy... heh. Then I realized it was Neville). The whole 'not bothering to check' thing gave it away. That, and when Hermione exclaimed "You died!" or whatever. It had to be Nev. Or maybe I just read too much. Either way, you rock, and I am enjoying this greatly. However, I must to bed now go, and I will continue my third or fourth day of reading this sometime tomorrow. Night! -Syco |
Darcy19 chapter 43 . 11/13/2004 Your story wasn't dragging out...well maybe a little, but it was that good kind of drag, that you never wanted it to end. yeah, well I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! Good job in writing a great story. P.S. I think I will go check out your other story, maybe look for me! |
ShamelessFinnigan chapter 43 . 11/13/2004 YAY! you updated! good chappie! moremoremore! |
Laughing Cat chapter 43 . 11/13/2004 Hey, I just read this entire story. It's wonderful! _ I didn't feel that it dragged at all, and can't wait for the last chapter. It's going on my favorites list immediatly! |
RedRaven chapter 43 . 11/10/2004 wow! luved the story, it was excellent! keep up hte good work |