|Reviews for Personal|
| SaraiEsq chapter 6 . 10/16/2012
Excellent. Really enjoyed this.
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2012
Great story. You're a very talented writer.
| pixiepatti chapter 6 . 4/20/2012
| Iratus chapter 6 . 9/20/2011
Nicely done. I like the way you decided to structure the story and I also like the way you didn't need to identify what happened in Face's past to cause his behaviour. Doing this changed the focus from events to that of the team interactions which I think you captured well. BA does have a soft side, Murdock does have a sane side and Hannibal defintely plays both the leader and the father figure. Keep up the good work.
| Sci F.I. Warper chapter 6 . 9/9/2011
Aw. That was...that was a perfect way to end it. You still kept the mystique of Face's past intact, but there was appropriate comfort for the story. Great job all around!
| Sci F.I. Warper chapter 5 . 9/8/2011
Face? What the? Oh God, please tell me this did not bring up things I really don't want to think about...ugh. *hugs Face* Again, great characterization. I particularly love how we get to see BA's soft side and how Murdock's pretty much sane when he's worried. Nice job. Hopefully Face will talk to Hannibal now?
| Sci F.I. Warper chapter 4 . 9/8/2011
Wow. Simply wow! Excellent chapter! I mean the characterization on this was beautiful! I could see every detail in my head perfectly! Love the interaction with Murdock, B.A., and Amy! You can tell just how worried all of them are, and just how each of them fits in the team. Great description of Face's interactions with Amy too. Just all around awesome chapter!
| Sci F.I. Warper chapter 3 . 9/8/2011
Well, Face, you are the master of bs. I think you can come up with something ;). Though, I still have no idea what the hell is going on with that boy and it's starting to get on my nerves...But he is right, if anyone can crack him it's Hannibal.
| Sci F.I. Warper chapter 2 . 9/8/2011
Interesting. I absolutely adore the characterization in this chapter. Even though Face was off for whatever reason he's been off, but it's a Face kind of off (yes, I'm aware that sentence made no sense). But everyone else was spot on. Between BA being gruff about the suit, while still noticing Face was acting weird to Murdock being, well, Murdock. Pitch perfect. The first paragraph, however, takes the cake. I fell in love with this fic the moment I read the line "I have a plan and you're all going to hate it." Pretty much the best description of Hannibal ever!
All that aside, though, I want to know why Face is acting so odd!
| Sci F.I. Warper chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Huh, interesting. Does the kids' disappearance remind Face of something that happened at the orphanage? And I love the characterization of Hannibal and Murdock, especially when their worried. Loved the bit with army protocol too!
| Ranuel chapter 6 . 3/20/2011
Those last few lines really sum up these characters and why I love them. The way Hannibal looked after Face through the whole story was well handled.
| Sarah Penn chapter 6 . 2/2/2011
I love this story.
| VoicesInTheWind chapter 6 . 1/19/2011
Very nice. I like how you hinthinthint at Face's past, without actually revealing anything - it keeps the mystery of the character intact while still giving us a compelling story.
This is probably one of my favorite A-Team fics. Yes, it's focused on Face, but the rest of the team is completely in character and present as well, which is great. I love BA in this, especially. Amy is good, too; I never much cared for her, but you use her well and treat her appropriately - not quite an outsider, but certainly not part of the team - and her confusion/surprise/shock was fun.
Very nice job on this. I really enjoyed reading it.
| JE chapter 6 . 8/9/2010
I really liked this. You did a great job with character voice. I could hear and see everything they were doing. From Face waving at the van while Murdock and B.A. were fighting, to Amy saying, "You know Hannibal, it's always the details of your plans that impress me most." To Murdock trying to tell the story of the linebacker in the pet store. It all just really seemed to fit. And toward the end when Face just steps into the fight and loses it, that whole sequence was breathtaking. I really felt like I was in Face's head. And I could picture everyone else and their responses. Your descriptions are really incredible. Thanks for sharing. I would hope to see more from you. I hope you're off writing somewhere.
| Ealcynn chapter 6 . 6/17/2010
Wow, what an intense story!
I really enjoyed this, very interesting plot and development, and I love the fact there was still mystery, even at the end. I felt you crafted the jumping time-lines, often hard to achieve, particularly well here, and the characterisation was brilliant especially in the last chapter. Really well done and I would love to see more Face fic from you! Thanks very much for sharing,