|Reviews for Pokemon Halloween|
| Copy-And-Paste chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
*flames* YES FLAMES.
| angelmoonlight chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
And I thought English was a compulsory credit...
| Lex Lexa chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
That could actually be a story if all the dialogue wasn't put into one giant paragraph... maybe.
| Kira RaKash chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
A funny first story! Keep it up! There're only two things I'd reccomend doing. 1) Put line breaks between each person speaking and 2) Go to settings and start accepting signed reviews (You'll get more of a response that way) I really liked it!
| Maia's Pen chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
Haha, okay. I gotta give you thumbs up for originality. heh- a pimp and hoe costume eh? haha
This is so incredibly random, yet it is entertaining.
My big suggestion is to just make a new pharagraph when another character begins to speak. It'll flow a bit smoother is all. EXA:
Ash: So what are we doing for Halloween guys?
Misty: We still need our costumes Ash.
Brock: Well why don't we go to the store right there.
See? Much quicker read! _ Good start tho, keep it up!