|Reviews for Draconus Book One: The Sorceror's Stone|
| SortingHat chapter 8 . 9/13
Despite the biased towards Griffyndor in this I am glad this is not strictly a script fic like I feared it to be.
I have seen some successful Peggy Sue fics featuring Slytherin Harry that turned out interesting where Harry has at least a neutral friendship with Draco including one where he helps Draco because he doesn't like Ron either who was being *paid* by Dumbledore to engage him and Harry drew the line which he would only harm those who harm him but allowed Draco to give Ronald a hard time.
The rememberball incident Harry was neutral about due to knowing he and Draco made a promise to buy a new one if he did break it so that he wouldn't get in trouble for it and ruin the house due to taking *unnecessary risks* which i s the hous e motto
| SortingHat chapter 6 . 9/13
Aha! I have seen this story abandoned and it's just as well since it's biased just like the original works.
I am not sure why this is really in an AU sorting Harry. It could've easily just been Gryffindork Harry with the word *Magus* slapped to his title and not a thing would've been different. He would've had his scanning abilities and wing abilities.
| SortingHat chapter 5 . 9/13
The only problem I have with the *canon* version of JK Rowling is it's very biased towards Gryffindor and it's clearly evident in your work as well. I can tell you're in line with JK Rowling and I have not even read her books or seen the movies much and can see it's very biased.
| SortingHat chapter 4 . 9/13
I also want to point out that just because a *pairing* is popular doesn't mean it's always the best or right for the character. Popular vote is not always right.
| SortingHat chapter 4 . 9/13
I saw your reply to someone about *shipping* and I want to point out I personally don't care who gets shipped if any as long as it doesn't take the plot hostage. I hate stories that turn into long drawn out mind games or soap operas where the plot takes forever.
Some of the *Hurt/Comfort* Harry fics fall into that category and the Methods of Rationally fic easily fall into that taking 5 chapters for a small event.
| SortingHat chapter 3 . 9/13
Actually yes. I knew he was going to be placed somewhere different the moment the Sorting Hat said "I haven't seen anything like you in nine hundred years" and the second red flag was "Albus having my brim for this".
The clues were all laid out in perfect order as bright as the noon day sun!
| angeleyes1984 chapter 8 . 6/10
has this story been abandoned?
| Sicarius Domini Erebus chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
Why is the story in italics? It's distracting, plus the odd indenting as well.
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/24/2014
Hope your muse returns
And this excellent fanfic gets finished
Hope to read more soon
| new guy chapter 8 . 4/18/2014
harry has unknown powers and has to learn to use them. no super-harry over night.
harry and hermione as friends - like it. couple in year 4? married after hoggy? children go to hoggy in the epilog?
so make it short - please continue! plz update!
| kyubbi lover 98 chapter 8 . 1/3/2014
Update soon please
| PrewalShadeX chapter 8 . 10/16/2013
| willam and jack and jake chapter 8 . 8/29/2013
this is very interesting can't wait to read more, also i have an idea for the fifth year, pm me if you want to know it.
| willam and jack and jake chapter 7 . 8/29/2013
very well done
| willam and jack and jake chapter 6 . 8/29/2013