Reviews for Witless
spritejessa chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
This was pritty good. I liekd the arangemet and stuff.
Aislynn Crowdaughter chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
Hi! This is interesting, but I think while you show a lot of Grimas thoughts you do not go deep enough into his feelings. Why came Grima to betray his people to saruman? What did Saruman give him or promised him that he could not get otherwise?

think Saruman must havegiven him something that the Rohirrim did not, if not acceptance, thzen at least the promise of power ad revenge. You should show Grimas motives to join him.

Second chapter, please?

Greetings,

Aislynn
Krahkaw chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
AWESOME! I liked it, very original and thoughtful. In character, and interesting. I liked it alot.

L