Reviews for Transformations
kaori chapter 54 . 10/18/2009
naraku? immortal?no way! cool but a nother twist! i like it!
kaori chapter 53 . 10/18/2009
your messed up babe. yay! join secret club! i have mentioned this before. for the wierd people by the wierd people! keep it weird , people! -_-z huh? what? were you talking? no? huh...thats wierd...any way... -_-z *snore* *gurgle*

wha...? damn i did it agian! yoshi knock it off with the sleeping dust it could be...oh. well. unexpected. hey dl do you know where i can -_-z

~* about four or five weeks later ~*

-o-z *snore* *snicka* huh? what? oh right.

hugs and water!

what else? ~kaori
kaori chapter 51 . 10/17/2009
dude i totally know a weapon you could use! a semi-automatic machine gun! no wait you already used what was it called? oh yeah! a gatling gun. the first machine gun ever made. hand cranked! could you know one of those things? that um...uh... do that one thing? heh? heh? oh right a flame thrower! damnit you used that too! oh! a postol with a scilencer! how do i come up with these! maybe i spend to much time online...nah that CANT be it.

hugs and water

kaori chapter 51 . 10/17/2009
the names for kaogome's friends are accually ayumi yuka and eri. you were super close though.
kaori chapter 49 . 10/17/2009
trans. chap. 49.

i am sad. all of this cute stuff is making me cry. i have never been kissed...sad ain't it? this is one of the most heart felt storys i have ever read. you really poured you heart and soul into this huh? i bet you did. thats one of the reason you kill older brothers and viewers. (mostly by mistake... right?)your cool. it seems to me that you love to laugh. to smile. you love to read what people think of your work. but critisizem hurts you. you use life expirences. correct? i wouldnt know though. i am just a reader after all. any way i give you water for flames and i give you hugs cause i love this story so much!

kaori chapter 45 . 10/17/2009
trans. chap. 45

well since the next chap says pregnant i think that is what it is. lol! its always fun to read it much later than everyone else!

hugs and water.

kaori chapter 44 . 10/17/2009
tans. chap. 44



kaori chapter 43 . 10/17/2009
this is for trans. end of chapter 43. for the note.

ok so glass wasnt invented but they did have pottery as hard as glass and they had crystal. so the reviewer is wrong because crystal is a type of glass. the type made naturally by minerals instead of sand. certain types of jewels are in the glass family: rubys, amathysts, obsidian. and others. it is how they are created in the earth with tons of preasure. and for the pottery thing they had to put it in a fire and the type of clay they used for the pots became as hard and as sharp as glass. it also had the same texture to it. you just couldnt see through it.

you get water for those stupid flammers and lots of hugs from me!

kaori chapter 36 . 10/17/2009
if any one hates you they are stupid. your just evil and you know it! you should join my evil people club. i am evil and wierd. but heres the secret... im only that way... when i want to be! muwahahahahahahahahahah *laughs the evil villan* *people run screaming* enjoy my review. its only fair. i certianly enjoyed you story! this is the best inu/kag i have ever read!

kaori chapter 28 . 10/16/2009
i couldnt find your link to the miediaminer site for trans. oh well i'll keep lookin' love the story!
kaori chapter 4 . 10/14/2009 much all consuming awe...dieing...cant breathe! *breathe kaori breathe now you idiot your not supposed to forget how to breathe!*... whew i can breathe now...what a relief. no flames. all hugs and stars and water to put out those who dare flame the great and wonderful dragon's lover1!
Die.Freaks1282 chapter 29 . 10/2/2009

-thirty minutes later-

Heh-heh. Sorry about that. I was surviving on snickers and gatorades. But I really do love everything.
lara chapter 63 . 7/27/2009
i really thought it would never end. but it was a beautiful story, i enjoyed reading it. i think that a short summery over all at the beginning of the chapters and not point of views. would be better. maybe for future stories? Just my opinion.
Happybird16 chapter 65 . 7/22/2009
One of the best stories i've ever read!
twianime01 chapter 48 . 6/15/2009
no!... so she wasnt preggo...
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