Great story. Write more soon, okay? I agree with you that PotC was set in the Goldern Age of Piracy. Well done with all the research.

Very impressive story! Whether or not Jack is making it up, it sounds like him, especially the talking-to-people-even-if-they-won't-answer bit.

PLEASE update...

That's great! But you stopped when it was the most interesting! I want more! Write more!

very good!

I hope you'll update soon, coz I'm watching you

emmy

This is really good, I hope you do finish it one day :)

-XAmyX-

Cool! I know you've probably forgottn about this story but oh well. I liked it a lot and was wondering...are you ever going to continue it? I'm guessing that Jack Sparrow is telling the crew a different story (lol). Very good!

And it gets interesting! Yay!

And it gets interesting! Yay!

This is a brilliant, vividly-written story. I don't suppose there'll be any more...?

YOU AREN'T DONE ARE YOU? PLEASE POST MORE! SOON!
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I've not read a prequel that really works as well as this one. WOW.. WOW...WOW! THis is an amazing story and I have totally enjoyed it all the way to the end. But, you aren't done are you? Please say you aren't done! That pirate ship Jack sees is the Pearl, right? HOLY COW! Please PLEASE PLEASE *begging shamelessly* UPDATE AGAIN! SOON!
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Ok.. reigning in my stupid begging self.. I'm part of the Black Pearl Sails too... I'm very glad to have read this brilliantly done story. I was near to tears when Jack was lashed ... I hope those pirates skewer Charter once they attack. You've done an excellent job here. I am excited to read more and there will be more, right?
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Good luck to you and again, MORE MORE MORE!

Poor Jack! This story fits in so brilliantly with the man he eventually became. Some of the familiar "Captain Jack Sparrow" is there already; the resourcefulness and indomitable spirit, the babbling -grin- and the rest is coming.
I really admire the way you can give an excellent sense of his hellish life aboard the Thrush without giving too many gory details.
Looking forward to more!

I've been hearing about your plagerism problems over on yahoo and decided to check out your story. Am I glad I did! Great writing! I hope you will do more-you sure left off at an exciting point. I like your title, too. It's sometimes tricky coming up with a good one.
Cheers!
~~Geek Mama~~

I really enjoy this story. It's a realistic (well, as realistic as a Disney-movie can be) look at Jack Sparrow's life before PotC. Keep up the good work, and update soon!

Nice chapter. i loved the descriptive-ness. anyway. . . *runs away*

Please continue soon! I love Jack stories!