|Reviews for Mission X
| DGtnsl chapter 23 . 7/8/2020
Different forms aside... They were speaking in a Makai dialect - which Ororo might recognize. Unless they were speaking a different one that they've been using this whole time? Excellent handling of the situation though! So entertaining!
| DGtnsl chapter 17 . 7/8/2020
Hiei cut and ran! Definitely in character for him, he's only got so much patience. Might as well use this opportunity to get to the roof and look for more clues on Kurorashi with the Jagan.
I'm sure Kurama will actually do very well in picking his own clothing out. And he knows Hiei well enough to assemble him a few outfits. I really liked the part where he and Jean talked like mature adults. Lol! Oh Yusuke... Its a good thing Keiko isn't there to gleefully torment him with all the extra backup.
| DGtnsl chapter 14 . 7/8/2020
aahhahahahaha, this is fantastic! Now Keiko just has to wind down enough to turn her attentions to Yusuke, and the fact he didn't even send her a note.
| DGtnsl chapter 13 . 7/8/2020
This is fantastic! I love the interactions!
Hello~ Youko! He's going to enjoy messing with the Institute as time wears on I'm sure. Though the trio of Japanese 'students' will be under scrutiny. Here, I see Kurama as that cat meme with the woman yelling. In this case, Xavier and crew are the woman "do you know anything about a kitsune?/is their a fourth member of your group who shapeshifts?/etc" and Kurama is leading the "what, I don't know anything" of the cat side.
| DGtnsl chapter 10 . 7/8/2020
Even toning themselves down, the Spirit Detective team is just too efficient and in control. A couple "flare ups" would probably have been smart on their parts, to fake out the X-Men, but they are definitely showing themselves as perfectly capable of being taken along on fights against the massing mutants and the demon is charge of them! Now we just need the X-Men to get info on the grouping of mutants. I wonder if the Brotherhood will join up or if they're disgruntled that people are joining some new group and not theirs.
| DGtnsl chapter 8 . 7/8/2020
Excellent! This did not disappoint! Hiei, oh man! Maybe now Logan and Ororo know why Genkai nicknamed him "Sociopath."
| DGtnsl chapter 6 . 7/8/2020
Yeah... Kurt's disguise won't hold up against these two! He'll find them surprisingly accommodating though. I can guess that as Kurama and Yusuke meet more mutants with obvious physical mutations, they'll start wondering about demon ancestry.
It's going to be /so hilarious/ whenever Hiei shows up. I can already tell he'll just appear one day. Institute security is going to freak.
| DGtnsl chapter 2 . 7/7/2020
I love how you are handling the language barrier! Poor Ororo; but like Kurama said, many people have questioned his gender.
| DGtnsl chapter 1 . 7/7/2020
No /this/ is promising! Excellent characterization all around! I felt like I was watching the show, could hear everyone's voices. I'm excited to see how the trio (duo?) handle the mutants. Kurama will, most likely, have the easiest time of it, used to disguising himself and making himself seem weaker than he actually is. Hiei might struggle with limiting his speed if his power is supposed to be "fire" though. Yusuke... Hit or miss really.
| OmegaUltima chapter 25 . 9/28/2019
Aw man, it was really starting to pick up, too...well, while I'm sad that I'll never be able to see this continued, let alone finished, it's obviously completely within your rights to stop writing whatever you might want to
I hope that you have success in your future endeavors, though!
| KuHana chapter 1 . 11/2/2018
Amazing story. Wish you’d update.
| Guest chapter 25 . 5/24/2016
I just discovered this story and it is FANTASTIC! I wish you could finish it!
| Serraphym chapter 25 . 4/23/2016
Gosh, are you still active on this site? Anyways, I remember reading this back when I was like, 12 or something, and decided to come back and re-read it. It's a really good fic! If you at all ever long on to your account again and see this, please PM me! I'd love to talk to you!
And, of course (though I know it's pretty seriously unlikely), I'd love to see an update. xD
| Winter's Folly chapter 9 . 10/12/2015
'"Ouch."' Love that.
| Winter's Folly chapter 6 . 10/12/2015
The bit with the jagan eye and the mind shield is kinda obvious to YYH fans.