|Reviews for Mission X|
| Gamma Cavy chapter 25 . 12/20/2013
well there's a cliffhanger, and yes the other story is plagerism
| yorushihe chapter 10 . 11/19/2013
No need to get snippy because people enjoy your story, adn also, you have enough free time to use up 1/5 of the chapter to post responses..
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/31/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
| Flayne chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Thank you for writing this awesome piece of fanfiction all these years ago! It really was a pleasure reading it up to chapter 25! :) It made me laugh and wish to be 14 again, when I first watched Yu yu hakusho, though I still have no qualms about imagining all in my head. XD
There are so many things that I like to compliment about this fic, that I don't even know where to start, so you might have to excuse me, since I'm still at work. Haha, I just hope that you are well and still writing (anything really) because you have amazing author skillz.
Keep it up!
| Anon chapter 18 . 5/26/2013
Question: Is this supposed to be at the very end of YYH, or merely right after the Sensui arc? If it comes at the end, Hiei, like Kurama, Jin, Touya, Suzuki, Shishiwakamaru, Chu, and Rinku are all S-class demons. The last six mentioned are around Sensui levels, I guess, but Hiei and Kurama are FAR stronger. Then on top of that, Yusuke is even MORE powerful, as he came VERY close to a draw when he fought Yomi, someone who could take on a starving Raizen, the most powerful person in the show.
Hiei and Kurama took such enormous jumps in power because they (especially Hiei, who did nothing else for six solid months, with only tiny breaks for food and sleep, often interrupted by more fighting) were level grinding like crazy.
If it is after the Sensui arc, though, they are probably at high end A-class, a designation that means that the Reikai defense forces could just BARELY hope to stop them if they went nuts. S-Class is the most wide open definition, just translating to "Anything Reikai doesn't have the slightest chance of beating", with Sensui at its lowest extreme, and a full power Raizen, Yusuke's demonic ancestor, at its highest.
| ShaYneYeofThEcrEatoR chapter 25 . 3/22/2013
The author has given me permission to continue this story. I will be posting the 1/26th chapter before the end of this month. Please come check it out and give me amazing critizism so that I can keep this story as awesome and well written as it has been up to this point.
| T. Alana M chapter 25 . 1/8/2013
noooo. why no updatttee?
| Leonard L. Church chapter 25 . 12/3/2012
In cases where I read an authors note that talks about updating really soon and then look up and see its been dead for 7 years it makes me wonder if something bad happened to the author
| Leonard L. Church chapter 3 . 12/3/2012
Just figured out the last time this author updated anything and now i'm sad :(
Is there a way this story could be adopted since the author's gone AWOL? This kinda thing happens too often to my liking, so I wish other authors could just go in and adopt a story if the author's been inactive for more than 3 or 4 years.
| Leonard L. Church chapter 2 . 12/3/2012
Poor Kurama, the life of a teenage pink haired demon fox who fights with a rose whip is sad one
| Darkness in shadowland chapter 10 . 10/20/2012
Ah, cools! I live in Georgia too! I love thiss ff, makes me want. to watch xmen now!
| Jason123456 chapter 25 . 10/17/2012
hey i don't know if you check this story anymore or not but i just want to say. I really like mind set of Yuusuke when the demon is trying to come out. how he refuse to lay down for hank ,because it was a show of weakness. that to me is a detail that really adds to a story.
| Dashusi4ka chapter 25 . 12/18/2011
have you thrown away this tasty thing? what a shame!
| whiskedaway chapter 25 . 10/23/2011
I congratulate you for being one of the few people who can pull on crossover between two series and not make it look like a stupid parody.
The first thing I liked in your recipe is that there's pratically no occ-ness that I can detect. And that alone is worth a read, because that's really the grand ingredient (Sorry, for all the food references, but I crave burger. Now.) to an awesome fic.
The plot you've thought up isn't bad either, quite the opposite, you quickly managed to ensnare me into your web of words. Though your chapters are too short for my tastes.
I especially like the mystery that you've clouded our three heroes in, it's always funny to read how puzzling they are to the x-men.
Especially the scene with Rogue, even though I had my thoughts at first, turned out great. I really want to know what will happen when they finaly find out besides the 'they are not human' and get out that the three are actually demons. And very powerful ones at that.
The last chapter is currently my favorite one. I really liked the 'low-life' scene and how Yusuke showed him his place- and especially how the tournament turns out to be.
As it currently stands, my only complaint is, that the chapters are to short and that it seems that you've left us with a cliffhanger, when it looks like you won't ever update anymore. Sad. Well, but one can still hope.
| Heir of Rage chapter 25 . 9/8/2011
*cries in a corner*