Reviews for Mission X |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting crossover. _ I just bought the yuyu hakusho manga(no. 7) It has a 'special' in it on how Kurama met Hiei. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAH! THAT IS GREAT! what was so different about kurt, kitty, and scott? was the prof just sayin' that, or is there a story behind all that? elaborate! |
![]() ![]() haha! glad to know that you enjoy my so-called 'company':) yes, you spelled singapore correctly, and no, i don't think latin is a dead language. (even if i did, i wouldn't be stupid enough to say it :)) Woah the US of A? cool. i've never been there.:) might pop in and visit you one day! :) ok. i thought that arashi would translate into 'wind', but i don't really know what tempest means. :P haha shite imasen desu yo! ok. "atashi wa honto ni atama ga (sorry, sp. error) yokunai desu ne" roughly translates into : haha(laughter) my brain in not that good ne! meaning: haha! i'm rather dumb am i not? _ ok, could you explain what you mean by saying the the security is lax? i'm guessing it means that the security is not very erm..tight? (is that correct english? tight security... hm... :P) i've never come across the word lax before. and my chi-eng dictionary doesn't have it... :P :) i like the ending (of this chapter)! i thought that you really had yuusuke in character. except maybe for the "so " bit... that sounded rather odd.. :P but then again, my english leaves alot to be desired... haha hopefully you won't be bored by my mindless chatter :) one thing good about you is your frequent updates. and though this is not really used in jap, i thik it's apt for this situation : dewa, sono monogatari ni! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Is it because I update so much, or *fishing for ego-boosters* because my writing is actually good?" Both! _ I _love_ this line: "Spill it, Sparky." And: "I'll tell you this much: it get's damn cold at thirty-thousand feet." And... well, okay, I liked a lot of the dialouge in this chapter. An-An-An-An-An Hiei's in it!*huggles* ~Tione |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! Nice! I so like this chapter! You've caught Hiei's character so well!And Toushin Yusuke too! This was a well made chapter! This is one of my favorite crossover fanfictions!I think it would be nice if your chapters were longer but if this is the prize to pay for having good chapter regularly that I'm willing to pay it! Get on with the next chapter please! Here, have a Toushin Yusuke plushie! See you next time! Aya-chan |
![]() ![]() ![]() heh heh, I bet Hiei set of alarms on purpose *grins* hehe, but riding on the OUTSIDE of the plane, whoa! Daredevil Hiei! Whe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter was hilarious. i loved it, everyone else in my house didn't cause i woke them up, but it happens. my favorite part was at the end when hiei and yusuke were talking. very funny. question- the professor asked if the rose whip was kurama's power, why doesn't he know? i thought that when koenma let them be found it meant that the x-men knew what knid of powers they had. or is the reason why he doesn't know cause hiei keeps blocking him from their minds? cause if that's the case it could be funny, they ask hiei what his power is and he sets stuff on fire to asnwer them. well i'm done rambling. love this chapter and I LOVE THAT YOU UPDATE ALMOST EVERYDAY, IT GIVES US READERS SOMETHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO. please update soon. |
![]() ![]() thanks for the update. cool you know latin! i just started latin in high school. it gets to confusing. anyways i like your fic and i hope you update soon. one question. who the hell is shadow tempest? |
![]() ![]() thanks for the update. cool you know latin! i just started latin in high school. it gets to confusing. anyways i like your fic and i hope you update soon. one question. who the hell is shadow tempest? |
![]() ![]() I can't stop laughing! Hiei was so funny! *deep breath* I think I wont laugh anymore, just smile as i remember the scene where Hiei got yelled at. Hiei's sleeping with Kurama (I mean in his room). I'm sure he's done that before (slept in the same room as Kurama that is. Must remember this is nonyoai- I need to start reading straights again.) Hiei- We don't want to know your problems to just get on with it and finish this review. How come you're in my reviews? Where's Kurama? Hiei- He's gloating at Karasu again. Ever since you beat the crow up Kurama's been teasing him about it. (see review from fanfic called Yu Yu fic if you wanna know what I'm talking about) Ok...Well KS, since Hiei won't hurt ya how about...*thinks* I know! I'll tell Rath you're a demon then he'll wanna kill ya! That'll make the kid happy. And I'll be happy if you update. That's good. Someone will be happy no matter what. Rath- Did you say demon? (FYI Rath is from Dragon Knights and has an obsession with hunting demons. Fav way of killing them is beheading them. He's so adorable! _) Demon? Um... Hiei's a demon. Rath- You're a demon? *evil glint* Die youkai! *runs after Hiei, somehow he can keep up* Kurama- *walks in and looks at review* You're still not done? Just waiting for you. Now I can end it. Update soon. Ja. *waves as Hiei and Rath engage in battle* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yayness! Totally awesome chapter! Heh, loved the last line. Gonna have to put it in my quotes collection! lol. Anyway, looks like Prof. X has a few little...suspicions.(sp?) Also it took them a little bit to turn the lights on. But all is to be expected in the excitement of battle. Hiei has GOT to watch that little smart mouth of his! (Don't get me wrong, I love Hiei, but sometimes... well you know) He boasts enough as it is. Heh, Sparky. Gotta remember that, lol. And the whole riding-outside-the-plane thing really got me laughing. But overall I absolutely loved this chapter and can't wait until the next one! (You do update nice and fast by the way (which is good)...unlike me...) Ja ne! Siora |
![]() ![]() ![]() _ So... Is Youko gonna make a special appearance? *hands out some more coffee* Starbucks rules! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "..."For the last time: I. Am. A. Guy!"..." , fangs visible.: The best part is that I can actually imagine him doing that. '.' I could relate to Kurama - people used to mistake me for a guy all of the time. (They still do, sometimes...) Anyway, great job thus far, though I've said nothing different, ne? Ah well, you deserve it. Every day now, I come home from Hell-I-Mean-High school looking forward to reading the next chapter of your story. Or, at least, reading the whole thing again from the beginning because it's so good. The odd thing, though, is that I'm both looking forward to and loathing the completion of it. But then that happens when you find a worthwhile story, doesn't it? ~*~* Was it your idea for the whole 'Dimwit, Fool, Sociopath, & Fox' thing? I know Genkai calls (or called? She died, so...) Yusuke 'Dimwit', but I'm not sure of the others. If it WAS your idea, may I use it in one of the stories I'm writing? -TrueChildOfDarkness |
![]() ![]() ![]() "..."For the final time: I. AM. A. GUY!"..." , fangs visible.: The best part is I can imagine him doing that. '.' I could relate to him, actually - people used to mistake me for a guy. (They still do, sometimes...) I SWEAR I'm female! Anyway, great job thus far, though I've said nothing different, ne? Ah well, you deserve it. Every day now, I come home from Hell-I-Mean-High school looking forward to reading a new chapter. Or, at least, reading the whole thing from the beginning because it's so good. ~*~* Was it your idea for the whole 'Dimwit, Socoipath, Fool, & Fox' thing? I know Genkai calls (or called? She died, so...) Yusuke 'Dimwit', but I don't know about the others. If it WAS your idea, may I use it in one of the stories I'm writing? -TrueChildOfDarkness |
![]() ![]() ![]() How DARE you leave such an evil cliffy? Just when I thought I'd seen some really evil cliffies, I find the ULTIMATE CLIFFY OF DOOM! So now you have to update again really soon to make up for it. Pweeze? |