Reviews for Mission X |
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![]() ![]() No, she'll be back. Trust me, Lemmings is not one to stay down. You should've seen her when The Counselor's Office got removed YEOWCH she was mad...lost all her reviews (over a hundred of 'em and she was only on chapter ten) and everything. GREAT story! Update soon! ~Niyali |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Writing!-sigh- I knew I'd get the auras well. Plants passing a football(or whatever sport they end up calling mutantball) around WOULD be funny. I'm laughing just thinking about it. -flashes a fanged smile- Well, I'm off to...do 's a Jin The Windmaster plush, and another Kurama plushie. Keep writing, Pewter |
![]() ![]() NO! CLIFFHANGER! EVIL! I want to know what happens! Evil! Please update son! Plz! THE AUTHORS HAVE SENT THE EVIL CLIFFHANGEERS! NO! WE'RE DOOMED! UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Er...these are some things I've realized re-reading that chapter. First of all, wouldn't Yusuke's ability want to be along the lines of his Spirit Gun techniques? I mean, the sensing ablilities and martial arts could be chalked up to extensive training with a master Sensei...in other words, Gekai taught it to all of them, they've already got a leg up. Is this 'mutant ball' real? _ Wowsa! Sounds like fun to me... Kurama's talents are apparent, and Hiei's would hopefully be fireballs...if he can keep from running around too much. Oh man, are they gonna go to the high school? I can't wait to see that! Ack...I've babbled on forever...get the next chapter up ASAP!_ _ _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() *dances* YesyesYES! Even more! You are the greatest! And I love this chapter! Yeah, I'd bet Kurt would be good friends with Yusuke. They have relatively the same attitude. Hehe... "resident fuzzy, blue dude"... I don't mind the cliffie, which is odd for me. Then again, I know when you'll next update, so what's the point of getting mad? _ I wonder what they'll think of Hiei's Jagan Eye... would he explain to them that it's not a mutation, he had it put in? Must see... |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO, EVIL CLIFFHANGER! *dies* Yay, Hiei finally got there, sheesh, took 'im eight chapters... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have not been reading many Yu Yu Hakusho fics lately, but I do try to browse through the titles every so often and yours caught my attention. I have never seen an YYH/X-men crossover. I never thought about it, but it works so well. You have given a plausible reasoning in your joining of the two worlds and have done an excellent job of blending them together. I feel bad for Kurama with the way his mother reacted, but you said you would take care of that. I am so glad to see Hiei arrived. Does he know English or is that something his Jagan would help him out with? I thought of that as I read this chapter and he called Yuusuke “detective” in his greeting. Since Yuusuke currently does not understand Japanese, Hiei’s greeting had to be either in the Makai dialect or English. Anyway, this story is great. It is comical and interesting. I am sorry to see each chapter come to an end, often screaming out in frustration. Look forward to your next posting. West Wind |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god...(laughing) How're they gonna explain THIS one? I can just imagine Jean or Scott or Ororo going "You're Hiei? How...did you...get here...from JAPAN?" *more laughing* BTW, I think most of the students refer to Ororo as Storm, except Spike who calls her 'Auntie O'. I think that's 'cause Ororo is kinda hard to say...her whole name's a tounge-twister. 'Ororo Monroe'...yeesh. Keep up the good work! _ Ja ne! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE YOU! WRITE MORE! |
![]() ![]() Don't ever let anyone tell you your chapters are too long because there is no such ting as a chapter that is too long. the people that say that either have a very short attention span or they hate reading. If the latter then why are they on ffnet? [personally I can't really write a compleate page, let alone a whole chapter_'] keep up the good work. You have a wonderful plot, update often, and have some faithful readers. What more could and author ask for? p.s I live with a little pipsqueak who also thinks Kurt is a 100/10 on the cool scale.[she not be all that little but she is still my younger sister_] P.P.S. Sorry for not reviewing for the last chapter. by the time I checked this story you had already updated to chapter 8. Gomen again! |
![]() ![]() I LOVED this chappie. I really want to know how Hiei responds to Logan's little threat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() We all shout huzzah! ::a rain of cyber cookies falls upon Kurome:: Hiei couldn't have made a more perfect entrance. _ I'll look forward to the "big plans" Kurt and Yuusuke have in mind. XD This is just... wow. _ I love it! I wish I could favorite it again, just to say I did. XD Keep up the amazing work! _ |
![]() ![]() Terrific story! Very funny! I love your characterizations and character interactions! I can't help wondering how Hiei will explain his appearance from Japan! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I would say write another chapter but that gets verry repetitive after the first 5 times so all i have to say that i can't wait for the action to start and ¡Actualice su cuento! ~ssj cisco~ |