Hey! I just love your story! My favorite character of X-men: Evo is Jean Grey. A lot of people don't like her, but SO WHAT? *glares* Give every character a chance, now. Can you make Jean use her telekinesis to move one of the boys so she can demonstrate her power? I can see the look of Hiei's murderous face if he was being lifted into the air without being asked... Anyway,CONTINUE! I love it!

*huggles Kurama* How could his Mom say that! ;_; poor baby...

I LOVE this! You've taken a crossover, which can so often be of poor quality, and turned it into something hilarious, in-chracter, in-continuity, and just wonderful. Your writing is highly commendable, and I love how you remembered Logan's connection with Japan! _ You rock.

Well, I wouldn't have thought of Shiori as the mutant-hater type, but you never know, so don't worry about that. As for the Yusuke-Atsuko scene, pick your self-esteem up off the ground! That was great!

I feel sorry for Kurama, having Shiori reactinn the way she did, though I think it's kind of understandable. I keep wondering how you are going to bring in Hiei, especially now that the others are gone. I like that you are not having everyone automatically knowing English or Japanese; the language problems are making this more realistic in a way. Can't wait for the next update!

HI!

This is a great fic! I like the three first chapters! This chaoter was also good! I like the Yusuke and his mother part, it was ... moving. But as for poor Kurama, I don

Keep Writing!

Aha, this is great so far! I'm really loving it. You're keeping them all in character and it's delightful. Your writing is very, very good, and it's an interesting plot. _ I have to read more!

nice. but where is hiei? (though i am a kurama-sama fan)

is that the correct way to say it? my english is quite bad

0_o I could never write a chapter a day. I take... a month or five.

"Yuus-Kai"-ense! _ I liked this chapter, even though there wasn't much action. The interaction between Atsuko and Yusuke was particularly interesting. Are we going to find out how she took the news?

~Tione

Yayness! I can't wait till Hiei shows up! (He's my fave.) But that was so cool! I would have reviewed the other chapter, but I didn't see either till just now! BUt hey a double dosage don't hurt none. Anyways, I think this story totally rocks, and I hope you update soon!

Ciao! Siora

P.S.

I like your nickname better too...(suites him more, lol)

P.P.S.

Anyways, if you don't mind I'd like you to check out my story Wands of Spirit. (Siora is my REAL username by the way.) It's a YYH/HP Xover. YOu don't have too, (duh) but I'd really appreciate (sp?) it!

Ja ne!

And Kurama couldn't have just said he was going on a school feild trip or something because? I mean, Storm doesn't know jap so he could've just lied, Mom thinks she's signing something for school, and off he goes. Hiei...how in the world is he going to follow a jet? I'm sure he can keep up with it but what about across the ocean? I like the Yuus-kai-nese conversation and translation. funny. Kurama needs some cheering up. Yuuske can try to get Kurama's mind off the problem by putting him in a dress! *laughs*

Kurama- I'm a bishonen! Not a drag dresser!

Hm... I wonder how the series would've been different if Kurama was a girl...

Kurama- Are you listening to me!

Huh? you say something Kurama?

Kurama- T_T Why me? *gets dragged away to be put in a dress and renact the series as a girl*

Update soon k? Sayonara!

Two more chapters already! I suppose if you keep this up, along with the dry wit and care for grammar and such, you won't be receiving those annoying 'Review-now-'cause-I'm-a-spoiled-brat-who-couldn't-care-less-about-YOUR-life' reviews. Certainly not from me, anyway. Keep up the great work - you got me laughing for the first time in around a month.

-TrueChildOfDarkness

! THAT WAS GREAT!