|Reviews for Becoming, New and Improved|
| LolaMore chapter 9 . 8/5/2010
This was really good! Please make a sequal - it would be pretty cool. You could make it so Spike remembered their dream. Ha ha.
| Mordanyes chapter 9 . 11/21/2009
I love this story! Fabulous! Great job! Minimal editing mistakes which is great!
| phoenix's shadow chapter 9 . 12/9/2007
hey this is really cool!
i love your fics with Dawn in them, could you do a AU spin off from this one where Dawn was Vamped, and Angel(us) still ended up in that hell world, so Dawn is left with Dru and Spike?
| daydreamer04 chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
I guess that at then end Buffy saves Dawn as well. It's good.
| BAKAMAN chapter 9 . 2/24/2005
| buffygirl52789 chapter 9 . 1/25/2005
I just discovered this story, and it was absolutely wonderful. I am a huge Dawn fan, and I always thought about what earlier episodes would be have been like with her in it. You did a wonderful job. I felt like I was simply watching a revised edition of one of my favorite episodes. I am actually teary as I write this. Awesome job. Now I have to go read more of your stories!
| Glenda chapter 5 . 1/18/2005
I know that it's rated R for a reason and all but it was still rather disturbing and gross...O_o...I mean I was expecting swearing and maybe some implied torture...not a big gore/torture/kill fest. o_o;
I don't know. Just too, way too dark to be enjoyable is what I'm saying.
| Dark Gotham chapter 9 . 10/13/2004
Wow,this is a really great story. I love how it ended.
| PassionateDarkness chapter 9 . 10/3/2004
I loved the sand castle bit; and this whole entire thing lol. The whole concept is great! I cant wait for more
| scribbles-on-a-sunny-day chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
So far, awesome. Your portrayal of Angelus and Drusilla is excellent! Very in character.
| K. Lynn Smith chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
Good ending, but dang you Starling! You didn't leave any hints about a sequel! Oh well I guess, If you don't make one then I guess I can imagine one, I'd just rather you save me the trouble and write one though. Anyway, bye.
| The Mardog chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
More Dawnverse please!
IF you do requests, can you throw a little bit of Kendra/Xander in too?
| Enn-Enn chapter 9 . 8/20/2004
*She hesitated before she stepped forward and embraced him. He looked at her, confused for a moment before wrapping his arms around her. They remained in each other's arms, comforting each other. They knew they wouldn't see each other anytime soon. Suddenly, Spike looked up.*
I love that part. And great epilogue!. I hope that you will write a sequel, your fics are really wonderful!
| Amarra17 chapter 9 . 8/14/2004
Excellent excellent ending. i loved it, and loved the dream and how much sense it all made. This was a particularly beautiful chapter and a really great story. I can't wait to read more from you!
| Rogue212 chapter 9 . 8/14/2004
The story is great! I hope that you will write a sequel, Because it sounds like you've ended this story for a sequel.?.?