OH COME ON NOW I DEMAND TO KNOW EVERYONE'S REACTION TO THIS! AND I MEAN EVERYONE!

This is such a beautiful story! I can't wait to read more of your work :) I really loved this story, and Hermione's family is lovely!
Happy writing :)
xx Sage

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I absolutely enjoyed this story, no but JK R could write the characters as their meant to, but I think you did very well in writing hemione. many 'writers's depict her as having a book fetish(books always in her mind studies, etc.) which is not true. Though Ron reacting when Hermione said Severus would stay over for the holidays, Harry hates Snape more than Ron does, occumency lessons or not. so it would be harry trying to drag Hermione to a teacher as soon as possible to check for curses and such. I know this because after SWM, harry shows no remorse for being fucking nosy, just that Snape was right in saying that his dad was an ass. But harry had no damn regrets. just that he was caught.

I read the first 5 books in less than 2 weeks, I had never read the books before, but I did in February this year, gosh so many things in the books that are not in the movies!

I have done a diagnosis of harrys character as I read from the 1st to, so far, i just began reading the 6th, and Harry is as every bit of arrogant and self scattered (not to the degree of draco, or course). EVERY single thing that severus has ever said about harry through out the year, is true. Something which i found rather surprising, i thought he'd be as nice as he was in the movies.

I wonder how that'll change, from despising snape, to trying to stem the blood flow from the bite. it'll be interesting to read how harry changes from a boy to a man.

anyway! i very much liked this story, you have a way with words (severus asking to see the man Hermione sees through her eyes) shit...youre good. those sentences just make me wanna-

-clears throat- lovely story! i hope you have more like it.

hermine entered Hogwarts when she was 12, so I don't see why shes been in danger since she was 10

"Third year. The night Professor Lupin changed. You put yourself in front of is, Professor. You didn't have your wand; there wasn't anything you could have done. But it was your first reaction. Not to run or to fight, but to protect."

That's cold blooded man. that line was effing amazing, I LOVED it so much I actually started pacing in excitement. You know those scenes in movies or a certain line that just moves you? well that just happened.

if Hermione had a sibling, the sibling would have been mention, remember, Hermione sent her parents away after obliviating them. im pretty sure she would have also mention "oh, and my brother/sister too."

I believe the reason why muggles are never really mentioned is because its much duller over there than here, the place that has a ceiling that's a sky. nothing worth mentioning about muggle family, is there?

I im eager to read severus and Hermione's sisters interactions.

who the hell is lucy?

Really enjoyed this story. Read it all in one go.

wonderful story :)

I would like more. But it was perfect as is. Thanks for sharing :)

"One doesn't become a woman without realizing the basic methods of manipulating men, after all." Seriously? What the hell purpose does this line serve in the story, aside from being pretty damn offensive (for both women and men)?! I was getting into this fic, and now I'm completely turned off.

this chapter was pretty good! Also, I love the book A Wrinkle in Time. I had just read it recently and I going to buy the sequels to it soon.

Hmm, I respect the way you ramped up the intensity, developing the plot using the nightmares and killing method to bring the story from kids, shopping and embarrassing music to a new level of seriousness.

Such a cute ending! Enjoyed reading this story, and good job! :)