Reviews for The First Faint Glimmer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wondeful, as usual! I'm so excited to see what Christmas with Snape is like... :) Update soon, please? |
![]() ![]() More. Please. More. I'm perfectly calm. I will NOT start yelling, begging, pleading and rolling on the floor with curiosity. Yet. Just write more. |
![]() ![]() Yay! He said yes! (That could be interpreted in different ways, though, hehehee) More story coming? I hope so. |
![]() ![]() Great forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find myself intrigued by the premise of this story, please do go on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that went better than expected yet totally in character for ss-logical, quick-thinking, yet acerbic! |
![]() ![]() Actually, I got the Lucy reference last chapter, but then I was addicted to those books and always refer to her as Lucy Maud, not L.M. This is so cute and well written and adorable and keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am fully amused by this... please update agian soon! |
![]() ![]() when you cant go one more screen just to log in, well then you know ur lazy! like me! well ne who, i love ur story! it'd be fun, if Snape begins to u know ignore the whole xmas celebrations, but maybehe peeks down from the top of the stairs and watches melencholicly and is spotted after a while by hermione. but then he retreats, and maybe she could u know go upstairs to give him his xmas present n hes all like a present? for me? n such n then have him genuinly appreciate what she gave him. n then maybe she goes back to her parents and he decides to make something for her. n after her parents go to bed, n hermione is cleaning up downstairs, he can come and give it to her, n then there could be maybe some mistletoe action! yummy! but i really have carried on too far n should leave this up to u. ne who, im out! love the story! ~ATI |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a strong beginning to what promises to be a delightful Christmas holiday romp! Good command of dialogue and interior monologue. I will look for your updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh.. poor Sev :( Please write more! This story is DEFINITELY worth continuing! "Please smash face against castle wall to continue." hehe... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I admit I wouldn't have thought of comparing Severus to Katherine Brooke, but their situation and even their colouring is rather the same. Just don't let Hermione put a red ruffle or red hat on him. But really, as a fellow L.M. Montgomery fan, it's a charming idea! Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! ahem... More soon! Ciao, Shifter/Fish x |
![]() ![]() hope you continue as great start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. This is kind of promising - hope to see more from you soon. |