Reviews for Twisted Realities
QueenNaberrie chapter 13 . 2/16/2013
Cool concept. I hope you finish this story some day.
dlsky chapter 13 . 12/24/2012
Its a shame that you never finished updating/writing this tale. I would have loved to have carried on reading more. Do you have anymore unedited or outlined?
imnotraven16 chapter 13 . 4/11/2012
please continue at some point
The Last One Left 0 chapter 13 . 11/27/2011
oi. are you ever going to update? please
sylviajohns chapter 13 . 8/30/2011
This is such a fascinating story! Shame you haven't finished it , but I still hope you will :) I love the idea of this force cloaker :D and generally the way you handled the theory of traveling through time and space. So I hope you'll manage to finish it after all ;)
Lauren chapter 2 . 6/28/2011
Um..one problem. Anakin could always understand Artoo...
Sagebeth chapter 13 . 12/3/2010
This ever going to update?
Tosharino chapter 13 . 4/6/2010
I like this story! Too bad its going to take so long for you to update. All well. :)
EmeraldWings90 chapter 13 . 12/9/2009
Oh, Luke's painting a scar and pretending to be Vulcanus! Now he just needs clothes and an attitude... This is gonna be great. If you ever update again. ;) Even if you don't, this was definitely worth reading. I can understand having other priorities. (I should be writing an essay right now.) Thank you for the wonderful experience of reading this fic. :)

-Wings
EmeraldWings90 chapter 12 . 12/9/2009
At last real Luke got a fight, too :) Incidentally, I think a 23-year-old Luke is more powerful than a 19-year-old Anakin. He did defeat Vader. Okaay, that was a suited Vader, but he still wasn't a wimp...

Hope Maya's okay... she has to be, though. A Senttian's too powerful to just get herself killed in a fight she's not even fighting in. BTW, her speech was cut off at the best possible point, wasn't it?

Uh-oh... somebody's confusing our Luke with Vulcanus. But did he really think these droids would have any effectiveness against Vulcanus? And who is this? Potential ally, once they clear up the confusion?

-Wings
EmeraldWings90 chapter 11 . 12/9/2009
Poor Leia, Han and Chewie... I don't envy them the shock. When Vulcanus said 'blood' and that hysterical laughter... uh, it really creeped me out. Makes me think of Mark Hamill as The Joker's voice in the DC Animated Universe cartoons... that is an incredible performance.

dcanimated DOT wikia DOT com SLASH wiki SLASH Joker

This is The Joker's wikia page, has a short sound clip... it's worth listening to, believe me. I'd never in a million years would have guessed that's Luke's voice.

Uh... Vader and Vulcanus... DEADLY banter...

...Han teasing Vulcanus is even worse. :)

Leia said yes? Uh... sensible, I suppose...

And at this point, it really looks like they can trust Vader earlier than Vulcanus. I'm sensing a bit of sibling rivalry, and definite hate for Han (the soon-to-be brother-in-law.) But once we get past the point of Heart Of The Sith, I suspect that will change in time...

-Wings
sexyninjalady chapter 13 . 5/8/2009
PLEASE,PLEASE!PLEASE!continue:( please
Renuki chapter 13 . 2/18/2009
Oh, this is very interesting! :D

Heh, hope their plan works. (And part of me is almost hoping that Anakin will run into this Vader soon, because it actually might be hilarious/interesting. XD)

And oh ho ho...well, now look like they have something they could use.
kamiam714 chapter 13 . 12/29/2008
This is very depressing ( in my opinion.). But I like it. More soon please! ( Just to tell you, this is probably the only angst story I will read for the rest of my fanfiction days, so you are lucky)!
The Golden Snitch chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
Hey, great idea so far, a bit different that other time travel fics I've read. There is just one inconsistancy that I wanted to point out, though I don't think it really matters...

When Luke is trying to comferm Anakin's identity, he asks several questions, one of them whether Anakin had ever fought in the Clone Wars. Anakin answers yes, but he shouldn't even know what they Clone Wars are, I am pretty sure the battle on Genosis is the start of the Wars. Anyways, just thought I'd point that out. Off to finish your story!

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The Golden Snitch
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