Reviews for Bindings
carolann chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
I really loved your story. You had a great plot, brought in all of the characters, and introduced some really nice new ones like Fize and the Trevilbrins. I loved the romance between Jean-Luc & Beverly and I also loved the romance between Worf and Deanna. Alexander was portrayed as a typical kid. Thanks so much for sharing.
Bindi chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
I have been working through all the stories that you just posted. The premises are good and the description is well written. However I am going to point out one problem. Your papagraph structure could use work. Mainly, when charaters are conversing you need to begin new paragraphs for each response.

Also, when you switch topics and lines of thought you should also begin a different paragraph.

If that minor problem is attended to I think these would be excellent pieces.