Reviews for Their dance |
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![]() ![]() Omg I have been waiting for an update forever and im not losing hope o fucking adore this story :) xxxxxx |
![]() ![]() omg this is so good! can you keep writing or is this the ending please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg omg omg i love this story please please please update soon ! the last 2 chaps were so sad i was crying lol miss black xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. OMG I really Bobby and Marie to get together. I was crying in that last chapter. Plz update. ASAP. |
![]() ![]() Wow! I'm so happy I almost had a heart attack when I saw that you updated! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() An Update. i love your story. i added it to my favorites. Bobby is staying, it is so sad. I can't wait until you update again. hopefully sometime in this next year ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I usually dislike alternate reality stories but I really like this one! I read all 17 chapters in one sitting and am looking forward to more. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I started jumping up and down when I saw that you updated! I cant believe Bobby's staying. I feel so bad. But i agree with John, things will defenitly never be over between her and Bobby. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HELLO! i've been like waiting 4 this Story 4 a really really long time. least 2 years. UPDATE PLEASE... |
![]() ![]() I totally agree with meghan! where is the next 4 chapters? |
![]() ![]() I've been waiting for the next chapters. please update. please! i love this story |
![]() ![]() if ther are 4 more chapters then y is it practicly a year since you updated! yoou have a good story going here yet you completly forget about it. i must say i am disapointed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1st of all, I totally love what you did in reversing the sci-fi and making them all screwed up. I have a weak spot for anything supernatural, yes, but stories about good-kids-gone-bad also catches my interest. 2nd of all, it's kind of a stretch to imagine any of them doing drugs or getting involved with any of that. but with AU stories you kind of have to make the reach. 3rd I loved the way you began the story, but I felt like the third actual chapter was out of place and a bit confusing. Besides, most kids on the wrong sides of the track don't seem to be to interested in explaining absolutly everything about themselves to other kids they hate... I don't know... it just seemed unnatural and a bit forced. 4th, I saw that it's been like a year since you've updated, and unlike any other reader who is begging you to, I'm going on the other side to say that I know what it's like when you don't have the motivation or whatever reason to continue, so don't stress because if it's not fun anymore it's really not worth your time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, i really enjoyed your story. will you ever update again. i really want to know what happens to them PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is incredible. I really want to know what happens. Update soon, please. |