Reviews for Knockin' on Raven's door
dude chapter 3 . 12/3/2003
wow... I think it is good so far. yep. i dont know y bb likes raven. my friend was trying to print ur story... ha it wasnt workin for them... porn took over the computer. ok like the story .. vash rawks! love and peace and wolfwood and lacato... i think check out my story it is ruroni kenshin called eyes of sadness or awakening
bye
Veral42 chapter 5 . 12/3/2003
your starting to kill what had been an extreamly good story. Might I sugest that it be a dream of some sort... maybe?
OoshatiElf chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
Though I would love to continue reading this, I can't. There are too many grammatical errors. Please do not take this as a flame, because I know that it is hard to catch mistakes in your own writing. I would consider a Beta-reader. I could help out, if you are unable to find one. please take what I am saying as erm, helping critiqueing. _
Love
the one and only
OOshatiElf
new york kid chapter 3 . 12/1/2003
come on finshin we need a nother chapter im dying for 1 please hurry
Dirk Bolero chapter 5 . 11/29/2003
...Blah ha ha ha ha! Blah blah, blah! Blah blah 5/10, blah blah blah BLAH! BLAH HA HA HA! BLAH HAA *cough blah cough* BLAAH HA!
The Scentless Apprentice chapter 5 . 11/29/2003
OMG! OMG! OMG! That was the funniest clifhanger ever! BB's in dep trouble! And talk about some horny dreams! Yeesh! lol Keep writing!
Amaya chapter 5 . 11/27/2003
Good now go, gets out whip...hurry before I have to use this on you, go, Bye-bye:p
kenshin's1 fan chapter 5 . 11/27/2003
this stroy i getin good hurry up with the next chapter please
RuKa and InFiNiTy chapter 5 . 11/26/2003
Ruka: o.O my goodness...never seen such a good fic befire with...DA' FREAKYNESS! *hands you a silver badge and some cookies* PLZ CONTINUE, FOR SAKE OF DA' FREAKYNESS! ME LURVES DA FREAKYNESS!

Infinity: -_-; she's on half sugar high...this is a VERY nice ficcie, and OMG THERE'S ACUALLY PLOT!... not that i'm saying that in your other fics that there IS no plot, i'm just saying that this is a very nice plot story, y'now what i'm-

Ruka: Infinity?

Infinity: yes?

Ruka...shaddup.

Infinity: ;

Ruka: I COMMAND YOU TO MAKE MORE CHAPS FOR THIS MAGNIFICENT FIC! THE R/BB LIVES ON! *is reading the *dreamin* part* O.O i didn't know raven had such a kinky mind...MAKE MORE DUDE! *dies. lack of air* *comes back to life* *adds of favs* *dies again* x_
Moey25 chapter 5 . 11/25/2003
OH my god! you've GOT to keep going! i'm dying to read more! UPDATE!

NOT tommorow, not later, NOWNOWNOWNOWNOWNOWNOW!
Janus chapter 5 . 11/25/2003
hihi

love the story, absolutely hilarious

KEEP IT UP!
Purplerave chapter 5 . 11/25/2003
write more I want to read. ME...WANT...STORY! NOW
Tsunami-dono chapter 5 . 11/25/2003
Oh my god! *lol* That was so freaky!...But somehow, I knew it was going to happen. *lol* Keep up the good work!
lavagirl chapter 5 . 11/25/2003
come on it waz good dont leave it so short
Inifinite-Bit chapter 5 . 11/25/2003
Hehehe Raven is dreaming of getting fooly cooly with Beast relationship kinda reminds me of Todd&Wanda's from X-men:evolution.
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