Reviews for Within Me
Red-Eyed Neko chapter 5 . 3/9/2007
-Sigh- This fic is so kawaii! But I'm seriously wondering, is this the last chapter? And how did you get here? I thought Hitomi and Van was gonna get adopted seperately...O_O Hmm...I'm confused, but nonetheless, it was still great! I especially enjoyed the first two chapters! Hitomi and Van are so devoted to each other, so sweet! Anyways, I hope this isn't the end, and Ja ne!
EscaPhan225 chapter 5 . 9/1/2006
OMG! U HAVE TO FINISH THIS! THIS IS AMAZING! I LOVE IT..ITS SO SAD! *SOBS* I FEEL SO SORRY FOR THEM...DAMMIT DONT ABANDON THIS!
Trumpet-Geek chapter 5 . 5/25/2006
Yet another simply amazing story! Truly exquisite! Please update as soon as you're feeling better.
ann chapter 3 . 3/27/2006
this is my fifth time reading your story and i still cry...
Newbie GK chapter 5 . 1/7/2006
I finally rediscovered this story again. You're a fantastic writer so please don't leave this story incomplete. Please update it.
tigger093061 chapter 5 . 11/4/2005
*CRIES* YOU HAVENT UPDATED IN ALMOST 2 YEARS! PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORIES! THEYRE TO GOOD, NO TOO WONDERFUL, NO TOO BEAUTIFUL TO GO TO WASTE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. I BEG OF YOU. UPDATE!*CRIES UNCONTROLLABLY* YOUR SO CRUEL... *SNIFF SNIFF*
Mukyuu Tenshi chapter 5 . 2/26/2005
i very much like this story! you have a great idea and great potential! unfortunately, i felt a little gap between chapter 4 and 5... did time pass or something? all of sudden, it seems like hitomi wasn't adopted, and the slanzar isn't thinking of adopting van...
MKILLUA chapter 5 . 1/9/2005
GOOD STORY BUT PLEASE FINISH IT .
aan chapter 5 . 1/1/2005
Hi! This is a very good story. This chapter was so nice. Please update, I really want to know what happens next.
Kintora chapter 5 . 1/1/2005
They're gonna be seperated by that WITCH? Argh! *take vodoo doll with Lou's hair, mutters incantation and stabs dolls ruthlessly until torn* I'm ok. I'm not insane.

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No! That's Louise person can't!

Please continue soon! I really want to know what'll happen next!
wh00t chapter 5 . 10/11/2004
yay
MimiGhost chapter 5 . 6/16/2004
lurve da fic

update SOON
Galene chapter 5 . 2/21/2004
wow, so intense *heaves a sigh*
PetiteLumiere chapter 2 . 2/20/2004
Wow! _ You're so good. I really liked it, that's all I can say because I am totally speechless. _ Anyways, great story, - I'll finish it later! Wow!
Ryuu Angel chapter 5 . 2/7/2004
YAAHEEY! *p-teddy appears from behind her oh-so-famous could o’ smoke*
FINALLY! *wipes brow* I ‘ave finally managed te find the time te write this review, which ‘as been waitin’ fer me fer quite some time… *kicks herself* some bad teddy I am… but I’m in a much better mood now than yestreen, as I already finished me exam *grins widely* (aye, it went well! :D) an’ I just discovered that the Maths one I did last Thursday was also great, got a 10/10, aye! *dances a jig on her mom’s desk* (lol, that is reeaally dangerous… in fact I’m riskin’ me life, coz if me mom saw me I’d be soo dead U). But *smacks herself* why was I sayin’ all this? The important thin’ ‘ere is that ye updated _ an’ that this chapter deserves one heck o’ a review! An’ *winks* it ‘appens te be that those are me speciality ;p…
First, where ‘ave I heard that name, Judy Garland? *muses* it sounds terribly familiar, but I canna bring me silly sieve-like memory te remember it! ‘nyway, the quote is again soo beautiful *dreamy sigh* ye know, I’ve got somethin’ like 10 quotes ‘bout kisses an’ such, an’ I canna write them in me schooldiary coz me kiss hasn’t arrived _yet_, nyar! *tears hair out* (*giggless*… nay nay… wouldn’t like te change name te bp-teddy *bursts out laughin’*)
Amazin’ but true *shakes head* I still ‘aven’t brought meself te remember what on Gaea is sophomore, an’ what is freshman *sobs* but well, I take as Van an’ Tomi goin’ together… which is the only important thing _ mwahahahaha! Mrs Archer, hehe, I like the name! She’s an “A
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