For how dark this fic is, it is beautifully written! They perfectly captured every character's voice and had woven all of the history of the X-Men comics in the story.I'm so sad this was never finished, I'd love to know!

Have you completely given up on this fic, or do you have it posted elsewhere?
It is extremely disturbing but the idea is very fascinating. It is definitely a very interesting fic ... poor mags! Please update. I need to see Magneto take revenge on this lunatic of a woman.

Damn, how can it be so beautiful and yet so terribly unfinished. I know there probably won't be a sequel, but I really want it to be.

Please! I beg you! Continue this story please please please

I know it's been about 10 years... but chapter 4 please?

This story was too hard-emotionally-for me to read all the way through. But what I did read was brilliant. Magneto is a control freak, and you've explored the way he would react to losing control in a brillant and chilling way. Having his control being taken by a female and being forced to live in a female body and experience rape was another really clever idea.

Why didn't you finish? This story is beyond amazing! You should be an author. Or write for Marvel or something simalar. Please continue this! Please!

I actually read this story some time ago, but I happened upon it again today - and this time, I noticed that you've been updating recently. Now, I know this is going to sound self-serving and all, but I find this fic really interesting, and I hope you haven't abandoned it completely. If you've got the time, maybe send a little love this way? I mean, I'm a total Gambit fanatic, and this is one of the few times that I really -liked- a story where somebody else gets all the glory (or pain, in this case, but to me it's all one and the same). Your Magneto is fascinating, the writing's great, and I'd really like to know what happens next. Pretty please?

wow...thats all that comes to mind right now...i'm in complete awe of your skills as a writer and I'm hoping to read futher chapters in this work in progress. keep up the great work! _

PLEASE CONTINUE! This is a very powerful story! One that should be finished. Please finish!

Very good story plot. I await the rest of chapter 3.

This story is great please update!

Add me to the list of people who want to see this one continued. I don't read a lot of stories that deal with the kind of ordeal Magneto underwent here (no, that's not a complaint; I did read the warnings), but I was intrigued by the prospect of seeing how someone so powerful deals with being powerless - and worse, a victim.

What you have done is a thorough, intricate, and utterly believable study of this complex character, using circumstances he'd never expected to experience (to some degree, experience AGAIN) to illuminate the kind of person ALL of his experience has made him. Fascinating stuff.

Is it right to call something dealing with such subjects wonderful, even if done magnificently?

Anyway, great story, horrifying villain and a wonderful Magneto.

Hey! You should update this!