|Reviews for Dead Woman Walking|
| HELL chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
"i expect great things from you"
"He didn't love Claire. He would have lied if he had said that she had been in his heart during the time they had been apart. Of course he had been worrying about her survival... but some other woman was still living in his heart, someone he couldn't forget. Ada. Leon knew just how stupid it was, for he was loving a dead woman. But something just made her impossible to forget. And, every now and then, Leon allowed himself a brink of hope - maybe she was still alive? On the dark days that beam of light was everything he needed."
Give me a f*u*c*king break. How the hell is someone going to have feelings for another in only a few hours you dumbass!
Indeed... what the f*u*c*k was that? Your so-called story didn't make any sense and it should have stayed on . Don't ever come back because you suck at writing!
| Liz Valentine chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
hey, compared to some of the stuff ive read this is accually pretty good. you should detail a little more though and dont be afraid to write in chapters. keep up the good work though, ok? i expect great things from you
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
What in the fuck was that?