|Reviews for Torchic Training|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29
i líked you shoul make a secon chapter
| IceMaster1928 chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Ok I enjoyed it. It's not good and it's not bad it's ok. Keep shining real bright PokemonSparkle1928 out!
| Advanceshipper3 chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Haha Nice one you should make a sequel May wanted some alone time with Ash teehee.
| Dark RoseXx chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
plz make a seque really good writer and i don't really like pokeshipping and dont read it so this would be the only time i read ur stories
really well writen and i liked the twist at the end very sneeky
| Wolfofdoom chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
It is a shame that this is a one shot it begs for a sequel.
| Austin Wright chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
this fic was great,maybe you cpould make a sequel to this story
| MegaSliferSlacker7 chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
MAKE A SEAQEL
| raltslover28 chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
i didnt get this story
| AprilDays chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
I like your story a lot and I also liked the trick you did at the end of the character
| Kandirma-Kendini chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
hehehehe naughty may
| Moo chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
nice touch make more advancedshipping please it delights me to know that an author could be so cunning. Nice touch with the whole lip scene continue to make more
| Hope chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
really good! i love advanceshipping!
| Shishisenkou chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
Seeing as how May is my favorite character, yeah. This is very nice for a one-shot. Though I somehow have a feeling that part of me wished to read more. Anyways, good job and I hope to see more!
| Ann chapter 1 . 1/13/2004
aww! may and torchic can be so sneaky haha.
anyway, great job on the advanceshipping! i love advanceshipping/ashmay. i never really did like AAML.. don't know why / well, enough blabbering, hope you write more!
| Rayna Ayoki chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
Aww...thats a cute story!
And to Nebstar, it IS aerial ace attack. i know cause i have the game... :-P Anyways, good story.