Reviews for In the Sands of Egypt
black dragon chapter 13 . 10/10/2015
Please please please please please finish this story it's really good and I want to see how it plays out
reader chapter 12 . 6/13/2015
So the assh-le Marik was working as an "inside" for the enemy? That's no surprise. When is Yami going to appear, the Prince was part of the prophecy remember? Also I think Tea should act calmer around Kaiba. Sure she's a hothead but she's also the voice of reason in the cast.
reader chapter 11 . 6/13/2015
Ugh Tea was kidnapped AGAIN?! That's 3 times in a row! There are better ways of getting her and Kaiba closer together than using cheap abduction plots. And why was it never explained why Marik let Tea get kidnapped the first time and suddenly he's all nice to her when she comes back? You need to explain and plan your chapter content better. Sorry I'm just getting frustrated. Still a good story.
reader chapter 8 . 6/12/2015
Grrrrrrrr that bastard Marik! I knew he had something to do with Tea's kidnapping! What an assh-le. Poor Tea why does she always get the abuse?! I hope Kaiba saves her and I can't till Yami appears! XD
reader chapter 3 . 6/12/2015
Whew! It was Kaiba who found Tea when she took off into the desert! I got scared for a minute and thought it was Bakura lol. Lets hope Kaiba protects her. Protect her ass Kaiba!
reader chapter 2 . 6/12/2015
I knew it! It WAS Bakura! Yay I hope Marik and Ishizu appear later on! This story already looks like so such fun! Why'd they kidnap Tea?!
reader chapter 1 . 6/12/2015
Awesome prophecy! I LOVED IT! Let me guess, the bad guy is either Bakura or Marik right? It just has to be! XD. Also this "valiant prince" is Atem and the "blue eyed dragon" is Kaiba? Eeek! This sounds so exciting!
Bockibear chapter 13 . 1/5/2014
Interesting story! I got super into it! I hope that you are able to finish. It was truly fun! :3
Guest chapter 13 . 8/21/2013
Come back and comtinue :(
Lubally chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
This story is brilliant! Its amazing! There are no words to describe how beautiful this story is... The characters are still in character, the plot twist is so original that it makes me so sad you havent updated because i want to see how it ends and specially how the past, the love triangle, the dragon (blue eyes. Im sure of it!) and that profesy are going to turn out... Plisss uptade 3
Mangafn chapter 13 . 4/7/2013
ur story is absolutely excellent... frankly i'm so impressd tht i dnt even knw wat to say,,,, IT IS BEYOND PERFECTION
Princessdiana516 chapter 2 . 1/31/2013
please please please more! I love Seto/Tea with a little...while alot of Yami/Tea/seto! Please finish please!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
OMG. I love it! More...please!
Kisara Alvarado chapter 13 . 8/15/2012
Please update. XD
zenbon zakura chapter 13 . 6/14/2011
you would think you would hear a horse coming up right behind you in the middle of nowhere
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